Ok, I don't get how she can haul off and always throw pot shots at Edward and get mad at him easily and then to just sit there and let Jake bad mouth him? And knowing Edward was completely right about the dude too.

Jake doesn't know a damn thing about Edward and I wished she put the dude in his place.

Good read.

It feels like adult Edward dealing with child Bella most of the time... :P Obviously he has his own demons but the last 5-6 chapters.. He has been really patient with her..

She showed just why he shouldn't be in a relationship with her, she says shit to hurt him purposely.

Mad cause he ain't jealous over some little dick prep boy? Come on, grow up... Oh she's still in high school.. She's fucking immature and it's showing.

Honestly all those pot shots at him and no reaction? She says she made him mad but but you didn't show us that.

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Best. Morning. After. Ever! My Gosh, u looked inside my mind and wrote the most beautiful Edward ever. I like the way Bella thinks and wants her Edward anyway she can get him. Don't we all feel that way? *Sigh*. So very good!

great story

hi i would like to know when the last chapter will be up/

These two are insatiable. But boy, the sexy times are great. I think its important that Edward and Bella establish what they want out of this relationship. Bella is has Loved him for along time. He's only been in lust of almost as long.

That was beautiful.

Yes, Yes, Yes.

These two are driving me crazy. But I still love Their angst.

I loved the whole story will it be completed. Please complete this story.

Wow. That's hot

Thanks for sharing..

Every bit of it was awesome!

Glad he cleared that up.