Please do more! This was a great inspiration for the slumdog millionaire story im writing!

Aw does he ever find her?

I love it. The style of writing is great. I can actually hear Jamal saying the lines (I hope that's a good thing). Keep writing.

Amazing :D! Glad to see that another author is adding to the community (I'm one of the other three authors lol... we are so few in numbers!)

Very interesting! I liked how you portrayed Jamal's confusion in the singing scene. I imagine he would be puzzled about what was going on, but willing to trust his brother regardless.

i'm so glad people are starting to write slumdog stories! and yes, i liked it, your writing style especially. i hope you write more, maybe another with scenes not in the movie too

charlotte

I love it!

You should know that I check literally to see if anyone wrote a new Slumdog story :) So, seeing that there was a new one just made my day! :P

Happy Easter!

-LittleLotte