Fucking good mate!

This was so touching.. the end made me almost cry - I was murmuring the song along with them and my voice caught in my throat - Fred's death really dealt us all a blow, didn't it?
I'm so glad you wrote this!
xx

I gave that book to my cousin. I can't read it aloud to him anymore without thinking about this piece. Thank you, it was lovely. Very good writing and you captured the emotions well.

:( so sad...but happy too in a way...I loved the way you wrote luna. She was perfect

I had tears in my eyes... my heart broke a little.

I'm sure I didn't need my heart...

The-one-who-is-plotting

K-H

I love how you gave a dark meaning to the nursery rhyme

oh god i'm crying so hard. that was a very well written story!

I'm crying so hard that I can't see anything.

i think this would be a perfect interpretation of ginny and rons relationship. it made me think about death, the little song. Fred fell out and never came back up

It brought tears to my eyes in a beautiful and tragic way. I sort of realized the meaning of the title as soon as I realized they were at Fred's funeral.

It was so bittersweet... Like smell of sunshine and child's tears.. You surely know how to create an atmosphere!

Thank you for this! Just - thank you ))

The summary made me choke up.

The story didn't.

Lovely.

I loved this. it kinda made me cry. just a sweet moment after a somber moment. i loved it to pieces.