lol he did sound kinda stalkerish but in a good way. he wasnt like "im gunna stalk u cuz im a creeper" he was more like "im gunna stalk you so i can beat the poo out of anything that tries to hurt u".

Very pretty, almost poetic rather than story, but well done...

I can tell you're not a guy, but it still works nicely.

:)

I think you depicted a lot of the emotions Eragon felt post-Eldest concerning Arya really well, so kudos to that. :) However, I think that you'd be able to write better without using the song lyrics. I think the way you write is really interesting, and I want to see more of that. :D

Really cool. I looked up the song and listened to it while I read the story, it was perfect! Thanks again for another awesome Eragon fic, there are not enough fanfic writers like you.

Hey, i like it! I always wanted to read a songfic of Eragon with either this or all I ever wanted by basshunter. Maybe you could do one for that song too? It seems to fit Eragons love for Arya quite well.

Can't wait for another inheritance cycle fic.

-Underdog112

I love the tone of this oneshot - has a lovely eloquence and flow of language about it. And no he doesn't sound stalkery, just cute... well, maybe a tad stalkery, but a nice stalker. If that makes sense. Anyway, maybe you could work a little on the beginning paragraph (the first sentence, though, is very nice) as it is a bit too obviously 'backgrounding'. Later on you have told the reader more about the identities of the two main characters of the fanfic and weaved it into the oneshot really beautifully (so I know you can do it...) but here it is slightly blocky in comparison. Overally: Really good, a mon avis. Plus the song choice is perfect.

good story! i like eragonxarya stories!

hmm that was really good and I kinda liked the way you ended it:D