Beautiful. And there's spoilers and then there's rescue from utter despair, so.

this was a good story and I really like it. with this hope of being reunited with Donna The Doctor won't go off the deep end. you should write a sequel so we can see how they reunite and see how The Doctor fixes Donna so that he has her back and then has a family with her. The Doctor and Donna get the happy ending they deserve. :-)

Squee! Love the hope!

lovely xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

It was the best!

I LOVE THIS! It's a wonderful fixit and obvi tons of lovely spoilers, and just fills you with warm snuggly feels :)

This was absolutely brilliant. I loved it so, so much - it made me feel better. Thank you for sharing this! :)

Beautiful

How sweet! Always felt Donna got gypped, her own plot line cut entirely too short (and would have loved for her to be companion to Eleven), so thanks for this!

This is good. You're continuing this, yea?

When you described maggie I thought: River? Donna turned into River? No! That's brilliant! And she's babbling like Donna too :D them I thought you ment Sally was maggie and I was like what? And then I got it. So, yea. Good job.

This a awesome story and it would be fantastic if you could do a sequel :-)

any chance for an epilogue? there should be one because this is an amazing story! you did a brilliant job on this and i absolutely loved it!

You should write a epilgue (Can't spell) for this story because its so good

While I found this story notably pleasing to read plot wise, I have to say I did not enjoy the style of writing so much. It's not as well developed in sentence structure and word usage. I would work on diversifying you language a bit and trying to throw in a few more words of colourful dialogue. (don't worry I do exactly the same thing.)

I also felt that the Doctor was vaguely OOC and while that is proper in this context I think in some cases it went a bit over the top.

I did like it though and I really enjoyed the work that you did on this. It's refreshing to find Doctor/Donna fans.

Tabitha

this story has just made me smile and feel all good inside! I haven't been enjoying the new series that much, and I just want David and Catherine Tate back, and this just reminded me of how good they really are together!

Personally, the fact that they didn't like each other in the show made them a brilliant team, in my eyes, but it works really well in the fanfic!

Brilliant! :)