Gaaahhh! Morgan! ️ I sincerely hope that her intentions are either good or become so in the end, because I must say I may possibly have found the first ever female OC that I actually adore!

I absolutely adore this entire work, and all that follow. You have masterfully crafted this version of Narnia, and I have become so engrossed in your world building that I don’t think I will ever accept another interpretation. You are a literal genius and I am so freaking appreciative that you devoted so much time, skill, and energy to this tiny little corner of the internet that is Narnia fanfiction. So all that’s left to say is a massive THANK YOU.

Your writing is so spectacular and amazing! It was super refreshing to read it since your style is so different and unique. I also enjoy the amount of detail you put into their language and dialogue which makes them sound like conversations taken out of the actual lives of the siblings. I enjoyed reading this so so much! Great work!

Morgan Stanley, Meryll Lynch, Bear Sterns... where's Goldman Sachs?

Daaaaang. I smell trouble.

Bahaha! That was priceless. Thankyou.

Morgan's introduction, I think! Re-reading it now, I see that if I felt that you had been inconsistent in her description, it is entirely because I was not paying enough attention. Right there at the beginning is her being described as dark-skinned. And hooray for that!

Still, this is only a tiny part of what is what is generally a very enjoyable romp, if you can call a chapter taking place entirely in a library a romp. Nevertheless, it's the most fun I've had with taxes...well, possibly ever.

I appreciate how truly animal like the beasts are. They are not little humans in furry bodies, they are animals, with every thing that accompanies that description.

I honestly can't tell how much of this is supposed to be romance or something similar. The basic ideas and plotline would seem that way (at least potentially), but the values dissonance and especially the language keep throwing me off. The writing style is very amusing, even though I can't tell which princess is which.

Oh I love it! The pace is so fresh and amusing, you have to know that I smiled the whole time reading the first chapter, and I's not due to the comedy. The conversations and narator, it felt really like edmund and hir sibling's daily life. Thank you for sharing your talent, I hope you won't stop writing, have a nice day!

-sorry, accidentally tap the post button- so i was saying I could not imagine on how that encounter supposed to happen. And I demand you wrote a very descriptive fiction of Peter and the Silver Birch Dryad aforementioned encounter, if you haven't already done it. With that I'm going to check you page for the possibility of thus fiction. Write more, you are awesome!

It was truly one of the most well written piece I've ever read. To say it expanded my vocabulary big time was an understatement. English is not my first language and while I'm able to read Harry Potter without any difficulty, I cannot say the same for your story. It was difficult yes, but I'd be lying If I say I didn't enjoy every bit of it. I truly wish one day I would be able to write like you. Great descriptive setences, never boring choice of words, and lets not forget on how classy you describe Edmund imagination, clotted cream and all, and Peter's encounter with the dryad. I'm sorry for being ignorant but, I've never read Narnia before, and I doubt it would cover Human and Dryad sexual relation possibility,

Loved this story so much! Morgan is pure gold and coincidentally, I am squinting at the text through puffed up eyes as my dad cuts the hay outside... I empathise, Ed and Morgan, I empathise! Have finished The Stone Gryphon Part 1 also, and I can't wait to red more! I especially love your characterisation of the Pevensies, in both worlds, and the obvious amount of research and work that goes into your works. I learn something new every chapter :-). Thanks for sharing!

Hi Ruth!
As you can see, I'm already here! I really like Morgan, she seems really interesting. I've read of her in AW, so I already know she'll end up with Edmund and I look forward to read about their relationship in Harold and Morgan: not a romance.
I hope you're great!

Connie x

Very funny read. I especially enjoyed the corset debate.

Four otters, three oranges, no clotted cream.