I loved this story too! I'm having so much fun reading through your entire archive of Labyrinth stories. thank you so much. however I find myself wishing that I got to stay with this version of these two just a bit longer, overall I still love them all dearly.

*chuckles at that ending* loved this story. I really liked the little twists in it!

Babieeeees
A lors of babieeeees. And small dragons and a lots of love! Thank you!

Enjoyed this one. Thank you for writing it

I loved this story. I was laughing through most of it, and I loved the mythology you twisted into it. This was a very well blended story, a masterpiece. Can't wait to read more from you.

Rereading. Holds up well. But it’s “dragged”, not “drug”., as the past tense of “drag”. Are you a hillbilly or what?

I've read this story nearly two years ago and loved it but somehow forgot how much until I rediscovered it to leave a review. Your writing is fantastic and the story itself is so well thought out and wouldn't let me go until I finished reading. Not only did you manage to stay in character for the ones that already existed but your own characters felt so natural that it seemed like they were already part of the original story. I completely forgot about the twist with Alura, there was nearly nothing hinting at her being one of the evil masterminds so it shocked me even more.
I adore the relationship between Sarah and Jareth how tender and loving they are at one moment and arguing and fighting at the next.
I'm a bit ashamed that it took me so long to come back and write a review but I'm sure I will revisit in the future to enjoy this wonderful story once more.

This is, without a doubt, one of my new favourite J/S stories. The characters were fantastic, and I love how Sarah's natural charm and perseverance let her ace the challenges. I look forward to reading this again!

Wonderful story, but you forgot that Sarah had the gifted gloves from Lance, so she wouldn’t have been hit with the spell when she touched the box.

️️️️️️ I absolutely LOVE this story! ️️️

I really enjoyed that Sarah wanted to prove her love to Jareth after how kindly he treated her during her curse. It also worked well with her character that she wanted to prove herself to the Underworld. I liked all of the challenges at the end. I think they they all reminded me of the world Jim Henson had created. I also really enjoyed that Sarah was able to remain in contact with her family and that Toby had powers. And that Toby wished Jareth to take Sarah away to save her. Basically, I liked your story and am just having trouble pooling my thoughts together at the moment. I hope you are still writing.

This was so good, you are a very good storyteller. Thank you so much. Loved it.

I think I noticed an inconsistency; Lance gave her gloves before she left the castle, yet now for some reason she has bare hands. When did she take off the gloves?

I LOVE seeing sexually aggressive women. I have NO idea why it's so uncommon here in fanfiction!

Ugh WHY do people write kissing scenes immediately after vomiting? GROSS! At least wash that girl's mouth out! Jareth is basically making out with vomit face.