Dear Author,

Double thumbs up! This was so cool!

Thanks for the story!
-Hyjinks

Awesome Story!
so you had a taste of the Dark side, eh? I hope you want more...

Good story. The little details really stand out here. i.e. "her breath hot on his neck..." and so fourth. Enjoyed your Dark Side Exile. Dark (obviously!), dangerous, but believable and lacking in a brutally forced "evilness".

I loved this! It was so dark and twisted. Everyone writes about the light side. It is nice to find a really good AttonxExile dark side story.

This was certainly darker than most of the stories I have read. (I actually came over from LJ to read your Mass Effect fic and came across this as well.) You are truely a skilled writer. Keep up the wonderful work!

Wow, that was dark. But it's good too. It has a really professional and high quality atyle of writing. Also it's very original - it's fun to explore what would happen to Exile and Atton's relationship had they gone dark side and this is, well, creepy. In a good way. It's just what you'd expect from them.

The whole thing about him being 'good at breaking things' - is that in contrast to Anakin's being 'good at fixing things'? If so, well done.

Great story. Really enjoyed it. I hope you do more KOTOR.

I'm always on the lookout for good KOTOR fics and I've found another! I love Atton when he's evil. Great job on this!