i love it! can't wait for more!

I like it

interesting...very interesting.

nice

Your Wonderful Beta is aggravated at herself because she caught things she hadn't before. Nonimus also found things that she swears she fixed that aren't right. (Insert lots of French here.)

Still like the story, though.

Gotta wake up my brother.

Nonimus

Hi Flora it's me again just checking in (Like you require me to do) I'm glad you did the whole power check thing to assess their powers but u never mentioned the sidekicks oh well anyway i really liked this update and I loved the part about the (Flying Cars ha ha ha)

Awesome

I luuved this chapter; They get to know eachother and all xD

xx

-A.

Well, i like it

Its awesome ;)

Update soon, i love your plot, even though its kinda used, but you make it... new...

Lol, anyway, as i mentioned, updaate soon, i love it :)

And whats her powers? :9

xx

~A~

Well, seems interesting so far. Kind of hard to judge since this is the first chapter, and it's rather short. I would advise asking someone to look over/revise/edit/beta/whatever you wanna call it because there are little things wrong that would make it just that much better if they were fixed. Also, Warren... apologizing... and... stuttering? That's kinda weird. In my opinion, anyway.

See, I got to it later. (ttfn)

Nonimus

Good, good very good you keep within the boundries of school life like the movie and make sure to emphasis the first-year student's reaction to the whole broken off-ramp like in the movie. Honestly though Flora I know you in real-life; if I bumped into you before we even met, you would have fried my ass regardless of the situation but since you think Warren is hot I understand since the Flora in the story likely thinks he's hot too so that may likely be why she forgave him so easily. Anyway have fun with this it's a good idea I mean I've seen the movie it's a school for freaking super-heroes with flying schoolbuses and awesome tests you can do a lot with this. Also and this is a personal idea but could you possibly improve the super-powers of the sidekick friends of theirs? Like let the transforming girl learn other transformations besides hamster, the glow in the dark guy be able to harness pure energy and the guy who melts into liquid be able to control it more advanced like shape-shifting and absorbing water to increase in size.