I absolutely loved this story!
Keep up the great work!

This is the BEST Storm Hawk ff ive read! and one for this best ff ive read! It pulls you in and doesn't let got till the end, even then it still grips u with this potential for a sequel!

I don't think ive ever cried so much at once for he same story!

My only problem with this fic is the first few chaps r split into huge paragraphs and ofr me took away slightly from the brilliance of the story

This story was awsome,spectacular,amazing,,perfect I'm actually running out of words please write another story like this one

OK

omg, that was so incredibly written. i loved it! i almost cried during the bit where piper died. so much emotion and feeling. great work!

Bravo! i loved this story! it was amazing! A from me!

awwww poor Aerrow and everyone. i feel so bad for them. this chapter made me want to cry

but piper can't die she and aerrow are meant to be! This is getting really good, really sad but really epic

WOooo piper and cycloia catfight. Piper kicks butt. i love Aerrow and Snipes reaction to that. they were like O.O

oh no piper! she will get through this she has to! this story is amazing, it would almost seem like a movie. too bad it isn't because i would so watch it

awwwww romantic moment this is sweet, i can make videos but i can't anymore due to something that happen on my computer. yay no more hurt aerrow

No bad Dark Ace. he is an awesome bad guy this is really really really good chapter. its very suspenseful

NO not aerrow, he was so close!

awww poor Piper, Finn is a sweet heart to help her

Aerrow is awesome! nice job i love that scene with him and warden. i always hated Mr Moss he was so gross and fat! DX