I finished it! WAHHHHH! It's ok Rose baby, you'll have TenToo, just you wait!

AHHHHH the tears are FALLING! QHUSNHDINSBSHAJJAHDHDJSBXBJS

I really enjoyed this story, but somehow the ending leaves more to be desired. I mean come on, I don't believe Rose and the Doctor would stop dancing after all that happened.

Not what I was expecting but great none the less! I cried so much!

I know you wrote this ages ago, but in case you're still writing, you need to distinguish between to and too. It distracts from an otherwise really good story.

Loved reading this story.

"I didn't mean it like that."

Ow, my feels. -sobs- ;_;

Omgggg your story is so good! And you please right a sequel SEQUEL PLEASEEEEEEEE

This story is so cute!

This is probably one of my favorite Human Nature fic for Rose so far. I love the characterization and especially the fact that you didn't have John change his personality when he found out about The Doctor. It was well-written! Thank you for sharing this story! :)

Your story has a great plot, excellent character depiction, and a lovely musicality/cadence.

"But now Rose realized that he was a human being..."

That part cuts right to the quick.

Christmas bonuses are the best bonuses. Also... awwww. He thinks he did something wrong... :C

Awwww, that's so sweet though.

Omg, I'm excited to see where you go with this. Like I have an idea, but I have a deep love for rewritten HN/FOB fics.