And the plot thickens! Wow no words havent read this story in a while. Im glad youre back to updating this. I know youre about to break my Brathan little heart even more with this new twist. Can't wait to see how Nathan and Haley find out. Damn that Rachel and Felix. By the way that Haley Jake scene was the cutest. Hope to see more scenes of them and their awesome friendship. They remind me of the Laley brother sister type friendship on the show.

Now Luke told at least 1 person whats bothering him. Now Rachael and Felix are still up to no good. Trying to ruin people lives even more.

This Jason bartender guy wonder if he's in with Felix and or Rachael with whatever these two are up to. So for some reason Rachael and Felix want to cause problems between Brooke and Luke.
Well Looks like whatever was in the drink messed up Brooke and Luke really bad. So what does causing problems do for Felix and Rachael what good do they get out of it.,

5 years have gone, but you have not shied away from drama. O. M. G! I can't even begin to describe how fantastic I think it is that you're back to updating this, I haven't read this story in years but as soon as I started this chapter I popped right back into it. Don't worry about your writing being rusty, I loved this so much.

Love the story hope you continue and hope BJ,NP,Laley Get Together at the end of the story.

love BJ,NP and laley GET TOGETHER at the end of the story.

whens thisgettingupdated

Poor Lucas not managing to get to his date with Haley. I'm glad to see that he's not too worse for wear though. Protective Peyton, I'm looking forward to her talking to Nathan. And her finding it funny that Lucas doesn't have Haley's number!

Confetti falling out of her locker, that would be awesome. And I like that Jake's there to hopefully make things smoother for Lucas. maybe he'll prove a link between Peyton and Brooke too.

So Brathan's back on...I wonder what Haley, Jake, Rachel, and probably loads of others will think of that!

Poor Laley, I hope that Haley finds out the truth soon.

Looks like Rachel and Felix aren't giving up, I can't believe Haley said yed to him! Looks like trouble ahead!

I really love the Baley friendship going on here. I like that Haley can say what she honestly thinks of the Brathan breakup and Brooke doesn't take any offence. And Brooke's analogy of a good boyfriend being like a good bra, I think she omitted the part about it looking good too, but I guess Nathan kind of has that covered so she may not have wanted to say ;) And Brooke's already on the pull, of course!

Nathan's denial at the breakup was brilliant. I love big-headed assy Nathan sometimes.

And Haley confronting Nathan, that was gold. It's not very often that Nathan and Haley have this kind of relationship in fics but it's so great! Defensive best friend Haley and bemused cutie Nathan, love it.

The Jake/Brooke is building nicely, as is the Laley. They're so sweet together!

Lucas is all nervous about the date, awww. Nice how Peyton was supportive, in a way, lol. Cute how she offered him the Comet.

I can't believe Nathan and the guys ruined the Laley date! I'm so upset! Hopefully though this will show everyone Nathan's true colours. Poor poor Haley :( Her situation reminds me of the time that she left a message for her Mom and mimed to Lucas that her Mom was probably drinking, makes me wonder if that was ever a storyline they never followed on the show.

Anyway great job!

I love the close friendship of Leyton, I'm glad that she has someone to lean on when her Dad goes away, and I like the dynamic between Peyton and Karen too, I hope this continues. I can't wait to see how Lucas feels about Pathan later on!

Felix is somehow hilaious, I love his attempts at getting Haley to go out with him. And his and Rachel's plotting gets ever more intriguing.

brathan break-up! I actually feel a little bit sorry for Nathan, although he totally doesn't deserve sympathy...I love him though!

Haley's now clear that Lucas and Peyton aren't a couple. Awesome.

Love Lucas' piece too, beautiful.

I hope that there's some Jake/Brooke on the horizon. He's so sweet. I've always thought that they could have gone there on the show, just because he was always so wise to the way that she was. I think they could have been great.

Looks like Nathan's venting all of his frustrations including his breakup with Brooke out on the Rivercourt guys. Things are getting interesting!

I love how close Lucas and Haley appear to be getting. I like this set up too, because it's not like Nathan can hate Lucas for stealing his girl like he did in the show because it's Haley, not Brooke that Lucas is falling for. Pefect.

Love that Haley could silently be there for Lucas after the team ribbing. And I also love Peyton's comments; 'what happened to you?...And why the hell are you smiling?' haha.

Rachel and Felix hatching an evil plan! I feel like there should have been a big MWAH-HAHAHAHA at the end of this scene! Can't wait for the drama.

Ohhhh looks like Brooke may have had enough of Nathan! Love where all of this is headed :)

Hey I'm back :)

I love the LP friendship and also how she tried but failed to cover for Lucas when Karen showed up. And I'm so pleased that Karen's now on board.

I flove that Nathan said that Peyton has an 'interesting flair' :) And it looks like it'll get interesting as it seems like the Brathan relationship will suffer being back at school. I am a little worried that if Peyton gets with Nathan then BP won't become friends...

I like that there's an air of confidence about Lucas. I guess that the Leyton dynamic is different from the Laley one in that respect.

Love the Pathan eyes that were happening all over the cheer practise scene :D

The one on one was perfect, and I'm so glad that Lucas won. Looks like things are about to shake up!

uh oh is Brooke getting jealous? I love the slow build up of BJ and I want NP they are so cute together. And yhe laley scene was hot and beautiful

Ohhh, looks like there's something between Brooke and Peyton, I wonder if it's more than just the two sparring brothers...

Things are certainly hotting up on the Scott side of things. It's interesting that Dan and Keith have spoken about things. I wonder what Nathan and Tim have planned.

I loved the little tryout scene. It's so weird to see BP as like, enemies who don't know each other. I hope they turn out as friends eventually. I love Haley in this.

Love that you're including the face off between the brothers! I love smarmy Nathan, he's brilliant here!

Hey, I must be the slowest reader ever! I will get there! I'm enjoying reading this so much though!

I like that Peyton's there to offer Lucas a differetn perspective than just following his mom's wishes. He needs to listen to her! And I love the little hint of NP!

Brooke is so perfectly in high school character and I love Nathan's way of making sure that school's not boring!

I like the slow build of Laley too. I think you're building it so well for it to be believable.

Glad that Whitey's taken things into his own hands! And his commetns to Nathan were priceless :)