fuck you Kyoya. Fuck. You.

i loved the whole thing i read all 8 chapters in 10 mins

I was laughing to myself at just how many crossovers there are of Twilight and other things. Seriously... There are like... eight whole stories of Sponge bob x Twilight. I somehow don't see that happening. When I saw this match up of medias I thought: woah this will be hilarious. I saw the synopsis for your story and my eyes literally bulged and I clicked on the story immediately, becoming instantaneously excited at the prospect this story posed. Unfortunately after reading less than a sentence and cringing in (admittedly melodramatic and picky) pain twice I scrolled immediately down the bottom of the page to post a review. I haven't yet read your story as innovative and exciting as it sounds, because of the excessive and insulting overuse of apostrophes. I'm not just angry at you. Please don't take this offensively. When people misuse apostrophes to make nouns plural it drives me bonkers. Please fix this story so that apostrophes are only used when they should be: to indicate possession or to mark abbreviation such as in the word "don't" where the "o" from "not" is removed. This is basic stuff that everyone seems to get wrong and it's my pet hate. I'd truly love to read this story but I just can't with all these apostrophes thrown in wherever you felt like throwing them. I don't mean any offense to you or your ideas in the slightest. I'd really like to read the story if you fix it.

love it I need more this is so good

Cool :)

sdsjalsjalsdjkasdjalksxaklsnakljsdldaasoh fuck. I loved it *-*

I really hope that you update soon. This story's got me really interested. The idea of having Kauru and Edward be a couple is new and wasn't expected. I like it. It seems like an interesting paring. I really do hope you update soon, and until then I'll be checking some of your other stories. Peace!

Please update this it's a really good story

I ADORE this story and the edward/kaoru idea. Please update soon!

Pwetty pwetty pwease (inserts puppy dog eyes)

Please please please please PLEASE update! D:

PLease update soon, it's really good, and I'm not even that big of a twilight fan.

You know what? I am really loving this story. Please update? Also, I would love to see a little more of Alice's relationship with Mori. I think it would be nice, like Rosalie and Hunny. Or maybe even Kyoya and Alice? Maybe she can get them both to soften up a bit? Obviously thy would just be friends, keeping the JasperxAlice bit, but I loved it when you said about Mori standing protectively over Hunny, Rosalie and Alice. Good luck with this story! I look forward to hearing more!

This is so cool! I am not a huge fan of Twilight but I just love this story.

I just have one request; UPDATE!

So Bella died in this story right?