Well done. I've recently been enthralled with Batman Beyond, and have been looking for a good fanfic. Here it is. :) I felt it ended a bit abruptly, but, that's fine. Nicely written, a very sweet ending.

This was so good

It a good story but tell me the reason of justin revenge

That was a great stroy. I liked how you wrote it. It was impressive. I've often wondered if Mary would ever find Terry's secret and how she would act towards it. Rating 5 out of 5. Nice

really loved this fic! bit of everything i like in it! batman, psychology (what im doing at uni), angst and the bone collecter! man i love that movie in a really sick sorta way!

so tired... really shoulda finished reading this tomorrow... its past 1.30am and im up at 8... oh well, it was worth it! -grins insainly- -falls asleep- falls off chair- -wakes up- "huh?"

once again, great fic!

mako

This has got to be by far the greatest "Batman Beyond" fan fic I have EVER read! A turly intruging mystery that just doesn't cease to amaze the reader. Keep it up!

Wicked fan fic. I loved how you wrote all the characters. You really captured them and their feelings nicely ) Write more? ~GN~

Wow . . . that was . . . really . . . *good* (Help me, I can't pull a better word here! Good! Yay! Whee!)

Mmm.. I like this ALOT so far... it's written so well... I'm going to keep reading. I wonder what will happen... I luv ur descriptions. Some of the ideas, like Dana's mom... are very far fetched, but you make it work well. It doesn't seem as impossible when u write it. I can't wait tos ee your new writings.

moon:aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwww... totally kawaii (cute in japenese if you didnt know) ending! kewl! meta: ditto. _

moon:wow, i didnt expect that. nice twist! meta: *nods in agreement*

moon:wow! that is soooooo kewl! is that book reel or didja make it up for the fic? meta: this is good. really good.

moon:man, there is so much suspence! wouldn't matt be worried at all? meta: he must not have seen the news reports to know. moon: i guess so...

moon:omg! this is an excitin fic! meta: keep it up!

moon:wow! this is getting more suspensful! wow, you are a good author! *opens her wings and flies in circles to keep herself busy.* meta:... YEAH! this is a great and exciting fic! keep it up!