| Reviews for The Black Marriage |
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   The Ram Princess chapter 1 . 4/9/2019 I would love for this to be a multi-chap. |
| Sex God chapter 1 . 10/20/2017 It was great make more . I have a suggestion .Make Sasuke meet Hinata and Hinata would have sex with Sasuke when Gaara is not home. Gaara will find out and make a punnishment he will Fuck Hinata so HARD like shit it would make her scream from pain so hard like hell she would scream "Sasuke... ahhhhhhhh! Stop please ! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2017 Yes your right it's was not enough it didn't even make my heat beat faster! |
| A big fan chapter 1 . 4/12/2017 Firstly you are soo lucky your family doesn't understand English it was sooo amazing though I did spot mistakes here and there but it made me come sooo hard I'm just saying you did your job |
| loveatkonoha chapter 1 . 12/28/2016 the story is great. You write it like you've done the deed before. anyway I liked it I think you should try to be an writer. |
| HxxA chapter 1 . 10/4/2016 Omg this is amazing plz make a sequel! |
| MeoMuop chapter 1 . 3/13/2016 HOT! |
| Princess mAlice chapter 1 . 12/7/2015 Well okay then... not bad |
| xoxo chapter 1 . 8/3/2015 Please.. I've been waiting... More chapters plsssss |
| xoxo chapter 1 . 8/2/2015 This fanfic is really good. Please update more, faster please. I'm always waiting. Thnk u so much |
| Grim Peasant chapter 1 . 7/30/2015 XD omg, why oh why.. its only one shot xD |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2015 I know its been years but could you write a sequel? Pleeeeeaaaassssee? |
| chocolatemonsters chapter 1 . 2/26/2015 One of the best lemons I've ever read. Can't believe this is your first time writing lemons because you're so damn good at it! |
| potty chapter 1 . 2/9/2015 this is fucking shit |
| Deira.Hatake chapter 1 . 11/11/2014 i liked the sex scene. Quite demon-like too. But you need to put in a little emotion and make the sentences sound more casual. Except that, its fucking awesome.. |
