| Reviews for Twilight Escape |
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brat chapter 18 . 5/15 If you want to go a different way with Bella you can make her bisexual and eventually mate her with Leah. |
jmw03u chapter 18 . 4/24 This is a fun story. I think it will be interesting to see how well Edward and Jacob either battle it out or share. Thank you for writing this. |
Guest chapter 18 . 3/7 hope you update this story soon |
SakuraKoi chapter 18 . 12/11/2019 wow |
00esoteric00 chapter 18 . 10/13/2019 love the pairing, love the story, would love to read more |
Natsuyuuki chapter 18 . 10/12/2019 Nice and Threesome? really? I mean it's nice and all, but Threesome bit hard to write. In my opinion, really. I mean, who would get mated first? or, Vampire and Werewolves, really possessive kind, so will be hard. plus they both kinda stubborn. |
Enishi-Haru chapter 17 . 6/30/2019 Hello Great story, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Please don't abandon |
Nagilover4ever chapter 18 . 6/12/2019 Love it. Update soon. |
charlotte1217 chapter 18 . 4/4/2019 Hi! I know you haven't updated since June, but I hope you come back to this story. I can't wait to see the Jacob/Harry/Edward dynamic WITHOUT the annoying Bella Swan. Thank you for sharing! I love this story. Can't wait for more! 3 xxx |
Guest chapter 18 . 3/8/2019 I LOVVVVE LOVE IT, KEEP WRITING PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ |
jujukittychick chapter 18 . 3/1/2019 ok, the baseball game was great and esme all giddy over getting to cook for an appreciative audience lol. and bella's now on teh scene...wonder how this will work out. keep up the good work :D |
Astrido chapter 18 . 2/15/2019 Great story, though having a threesome (orion, edward, jacob ) is a bit weird. Anyway, chapter 17 and 18 are the same. Cheers Maya |
Love Faith Embers chapter 18 . 1/25/2019 Great so far! More please! |
Rajani-the-Freak chapter 18 . 1/13/2019 Just finnished reading the fic. i like it so far. It's a bit funny that they are talking about bella like she's the plague XP But I hope she doesn't get bashed, or at least not too badly. All things considered, the fact that she isn't prejudiced against vampires and wolf-shifters works for her character as something that Orion could respect (the fact that she might get feelings for Orion's men, however... yeah, keep away from them gurl!). Unless Orion decides he wants to take care of her, just like Edwards and Jacob have decided to take care of him, and they become some weird poly-amorous polygon, I don't see a romantic relationship between Bella and the 'main trio' working out. I also wonder how you are going to deal with the whole imprinting thing, sicne it seems that Jacob hasn't imprinted on Orion (at least it isn't described) and since Renesme won't be born here... well... One thing, though. I think leah really got quite the shaft after she becomes a shifter, especially since the transformation is likely to keep her barren, so I was wondering if you could make her imprint on a wizard or witch that comes looking for Harry (Tonks might be a good option and her jovial cheer might just be what she needs). Coming back to Bella, if she doesn't get together with anyone in the trio or the Twilight population, perhaps she could end up with someone from the HP-verse too. I'm just not sure who, though. It needs to be someone who either can get her out of her wallflower mentality into showing some personality, or someone that just fits nicely into her current personality (which would probably relegate her to an unimportant role all things considered). If possible, I would like to see Luna and Alice meet. They are just so kooky o their own, and it be interesting to see how they got along when they finally met. Though he if far from being my favorite, I do wonder how Snape will react to this, especially when he finds out Harry isn't Lily's (or James' for that matter). Probably not too well, though. he only helped so far because he thought Harry was Lilly's and finding out Harry is actually son of two people he hates, especially considering the almost-getting-eaten-by-a-werewolf scene in his school days. |
erin.bail chapter 18 . 12/2/2018 this is great! Loving this story a lot. Keep going |