Very nice story, from beginning to end :D
It's very interesting to see the evolution of the characters, their respective stories and their feelings. Carlisle and Esme complement each other very well, especially after what they have each experienced. Their love is sweet, balanced, sincere and very harmonious. Thank you for this story :)

I love how you described Esme’s suicide scene, and Carlisle rescuing her. That fact that he was praying he could restrain himself from drinking her blood was perfect!

Some good lovin'... I am a little terrified.

He's in LOVE. He would do anything for his big hunk of bonecrushing love.
-Astrid Hofferson, 6 march, 2010.

I have read this story before, and it is a great story. I love how I can get the small pictures made in my mind from the details you use. And I love the second to last sentence you use. 'Mrs. Evenson? The doctor will see you now.' That always makes me think of the Fifty Shades of Grey book, when it says 'Miss Steele? Mr. Grey will see you now.' You are a great author, keep up the fine work.

I was really engrossed in this story about these two beautiful people. I like your choices for how this wonderful family began.

I'm liking your story a lot. Sometimes the typos are annoying, but it's definitely worth reading anyway. I like the last goings on... "Boys, boys, behave!" Here's the Esme we know and love!

yes, yes, yes, yes, yes!
finally! the proposal i was waiting for.. and it was better than i'd ever imagined.

Obviously Carlisle gained some knowledge of how to give Esme what she wants.

Damn, I wish I could so be Esme right now, giving Carlisle all of the pleasure that he deserves.

Damn, I cannot wait to see what Carlisle is thinking about Esme, and that last kiss. I so wish I was Esme making those first few moves on Carlisle after the wedding.

After Carlisle asked Esme to be his wife, that got pretty steamy. I tried to imagine me in Esme's situation while reading. What a rush.

Love is what makes us who we are, and without it we are nothing. Esme make's Carlisle who he is and he completes her.

This chapter was very touching to me, now in reality I can confide in Esme, I too had a son that died on the day of his 1st b-day of a lung infection. And had a miscarriage of what would have been a baby girl, but I guess it was not meant to be. I am doomed with having children, just to find out that they will not live long enough to understand what life is. My heart ache's that Esme went through what she has.

Charles deserved to die for what he had done to Esme and for what he tried to do to Carlisle. This is why we shouldn't let our pride overcome us or bad things can happen either to us or to others.