| Reviews for Naruto: Whirlpool Chronicles |
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   Gwentor chapter 20 . 7/18 This story is terrible, I feel like I'm losing IQ just by reading it. |
| robert krause chapter 2 . 7/11 when Naruto and the fox had get to took body of star fox and when muslces on him get big and size super now , when his ninjas shit and blue jeans or black when the 2 had get swords and others ninjas stuff and took out s class bad guys and woman too, when the boys had took out his dad old foes and when in the inn Naruto and the fox find money and gold and others stuff and art too when back in the whirlpool both had get a ex navy ship to living on when in the cap bed room is art on the wall and some time the 2 had living now, when Naruto and the fox had took down abut black ops both the 1 one and roots own army and took money and swords and ninjas stuff too, Naruto put the abut black mask on the wall of mass room and fox 1 and 2 and others too like dog and birds and when Naruto and the fox had sleep in the twin beds 2 of them now, when Naruto had keeping eyes on jobs and others clans too, |
| Smartyul chapter 42 . 5/12 I loved reading this story. |
| ninoc3225 chapter 9 . 5/5 I've enjoyed so far |
| Kingkong101 chapter 41 . 12/11/2019 Sucks so bad |
| UltimateGenius chapter 1 . 12/10/2019 great story |
| theunicornking11 chapter 1 . 10/7/2019 You need to have better explanations on why things happen. You’re setting it up so that the reader has to fill in the gaps and make stuff up that can confuse them even more later on. Good idea for a story and set up well you just need to connect the dots between each moment better. |
| groverthegoat chapter 2 . 10/1/2019 when you use western names like eric it really ruins the story |
| Guest chapter 42 . 9/15/2019 yo that was really good |
| Brandon Boodoo chapter 15 . 8/31/2019 Nope Nope Nope ... you were doing soooooo well and then you had him go to pein and Konoha? nope sorry but i can't read this any longer because i'm allergic to trash. thanks! |
| littleditto chapter 42 . 6/28/2019 great story. kudos |
| samuel soniran chapter 4 . 6/24/2019 i love the new change naruto being strong and let the atkasuki be friendly and let naruto with yugitini get to whirlpool country |
| Raizen1125 chapter 42 . 3/18/2019 God Red, you are the only author for this fandom who never let me down. I finally went back and red your old NaruYugi I had in my backlog and I was not disappointed. You are the best of this fandom, and to date have written the best Naruto and Erza fic ever. Hope you're still around, and enjoying your writing. I tried to learn from this story in terms of writing fight scenes, and I hope to take what I learned and make my own stories better. Stay awesome, friend. |
| Jj chapter 8 . 3/10/2019 Tobi it it a good boy |
| NaruhinaloverUA chapter 31 . 2/24/2019 Nice story. Liked NarutoXYugito pairing. Keep up the great work and good luck for your future works. |
