Reviews for The Meadow |
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![]() ![]() The angst in your pieces always makes me happy though its natural effect is to simply tear your heart in two. I'm just simply drawn to angst and love it above any genre. Period. And I am so glad that in most of your pieces, you have it. Zeki is like the couple that's really suited for this genre after all, aside from Romeo & Juliet. From your first Zeki fic, I could see improvement in your writing styles. Such improvement is even more profound in your more recent zeki fic, 'Longing' (the first fic I read among your crafts). Job well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AAAAHHHHH OMG THE FEELS |
![]() ![]() ![]() i totally love the way she confesses her love for him.. "i wake up,screaming for you"? fuck i lost my mind and my breath at this line! hotttttt. u are awesome at these really hot hard to handle stuff! love u! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Verrrryyyy hot xD Really good writing ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww. So cute! Makes me want to cry tears of joy! |
![]() ![]() that WAS a bit too much-Yuuki may be outgoing, but not THAT much |
![]() ![]() ![]() o/o -blushes- Well, that was... ermm... SEXAY ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED IT~! |
![]() ![]() All I can say is...: Wow. Beautiful. see, THAT'S what sex should be! Not how media portrays it. Good on you for writing such an amazing piece! |
![]() ![]() ![]() just enough. :D another great oneshot |
![]() ![]() Mahvelous dahling, mahvelous. One of the most "IC" "OC" fanfiction short stories I have read as of yet. I've also taken the pleasure of reading a few of your other pieces involving this fiery little coupling and I must say - it was exhilarating ;) But putting hormones aside, it was eloquent to say the least, and captivating in its best moments. Although some of the diction had me pausing and re-reading a couple sentences, it was overall an 8.9 out of 10 on my scale. Thank you for writing. And by all means - don't quit! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did Zero eat Shakespeare? Because some of his lines are just so oddly structured, I swear they came out of Shakespeare. |
![]() ![]() the u write ur stories...its beautiful. god i think i jus wet myself *O* wow yuki has become a very perverted woman..lol plz more i beggin u! (i hav nothing else to do...jk) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was HAWT! Loved it! |