Aww. Isn't that sweet of them?

HEHEHEHB LOVE IT! MAKE MORE! :3

That was so beautifully touching! Excuse me while I fangirl all over your story... ;b

Awe. I loved it.

*covers mouth and squeals loudly, all the while squirming in her seat* OH MY GOSH that was so sweet!

I think you captured their personalities brilliantly! Marus is all shy and at the same time he's all gentlemanly and THE BLUSH and the woman JIBE. *HEARTS* Urban is so sensitive and endearing and BOLD at the same time. Two thumbs up and if I had another had, that thumb would be up too! :)

Keep writing!

-AmethystGrey

This is such a sweet story!

I think you captured the characters perfectly, especially Urban's vulnerability. When I read this, I did think, "You know, the book never really explains what happens to him in the immediate aftermath of the attack." This was a good scene to explore.

Absolutely wonderful! _

love it! wow was that cute! i have no idea if you were going for a bit of binding but it was really fluffy and cute! really! i love it and really want you to write another chapter cuz htat would be really cools...

loves!

~soulless~

Oh! That was so endearing! Bleh, I feel lame for that being the only word that comes to mind, but it's lovely. I like it. A lot. Thank you for this lovely little tale.