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ok, I have to say, this chapter is surprisingly good. I like the plot, though there are onl 13 chapters, I’ll say that I LIKE this series, thanks for writing it. Bye!

I know a lot of people gave you a lot of hate for this. I know you probably won't see this comment because you moved on. On the rare chance that you see this comment, I want you to know I really enjoyed your story.

I like it keep up the good work

thanks you the read! I loved trying to figure out who was who, that realization at the end about Hidan got me! I might've screamed! and the Oba-San! it's the weird bunny lady?!

Nothing else to say except an excellent story though I do wish you would have set him up with Hinata

I can't even get past the first two paragraphs. The premise is just bullshit. . You just change the outcome of this Canon event without any reason. Naruto saved the village from Pain they wouldn't paint him as a villain.. I cannot even recognize the characters. Tsunade is a battle hardened shinobi of almost five decades, the last Senju, niece of Tobirama, granddaughter of Hashirama and Mito, the previous kyuubi host, the pupil of hiruzen, the team mate of Jiraya and Orochimaru, the one who challenged Hanzo the Salamanderz one of the legendary şannın, the greatest medic nib in the whole world. As a shinobi she's the crop of the crop. Its absolutely ridiculous for Tsunade to be "scared of what he could do" as I f she was a frightened genin fresh out of the academy. She knows exactly what she's dealing with in a jinjuriki. How the outbreak was caused by extreme emotion and even then could have been reigned in by yamato
As for courage, That woman fought Madara without hesitation.

Not only that she has absolute faith in Naruto ever since the bet about the rasenhan training and the following three-way lock where he saved her with (almost) his life.

I also tell you that a jinjuuriki would never be sent away as the biju are incredible menaces and at the same time weapons that are divided up between the major villages. The nine tails as the strongest one falling into the hands of, let's say, cloud or reforming in the wild and coming back to get his revenge on Konoha would be worst possible scenario.

This story was not good. Fuck you, but I fucked you whore cunt mother harder

There’s plot. Straightforward dialogue. It seems like all the anti Naruto people have lost their common sense. An unknown shinobi (wearing a hooded cloak and mask- how much more suspicious can you get?) was led right into the middle of a meeting of the Villages most important people. This fic is a blunt hammer using blind hate with nothing else as a plot device. Too convenient, and makes the characters feel paper thin.

Except for Pro-Naruto, maybe go into why it took a year for some villagers to leave Konoha? Why Shikaku, a shinobi who fought wars for Konoha and has lost friends to it, has become recluse? He is able to put duty first and cope with the loss of his son. His actions convey that he’s having second thoughts about Konoha. Second thought’s about his own actions.

Maybe this fic could have gone more into that struggle that many characters had to face when a loyal shinobi was exiled from Konoha, due to the blind hatred of mobs. There is no reason a jinchuriki should be exiled. Imprisoned until a more suitable host is found? Kept out of the public eye and taught more control? Sure, but let a dangerous political piece go? No.

It does get the job done and moves the plot forward quickly. Great if you want character bashing and regretful people. Seeing the light of their errors... after 15 years. Maybe it’s too late for their apologies, and Konaha is a huge red puddle waiting to happen. Maybe Naruto grows from being a big ball of hurt?

Who knows. I can’t read anymore of this fic. The dialogue feels so forced, there’s no personality- it’s all plot or people writhing in their own shame, again no personality. Such a blunt hammer. I’m done. The author has potential, just flesh out your characters and give them real motivations for their actions. Motivations that were made with their personality, history, and common sense.

Love it bro

This was a good story but I wish there was more

I love your work. I'm pretty much going through and reading all of them in the categories I actually know, like Naruto and Harry Potter. This was my first Naruto fanfic by you and I loved it. I wish it had been longer but I also can't wait to read the next one. :3

Loved it. I was thoroughly happy with this story. But I could have enjoyed a lot more konoha bashing. Especially sakura bashing

Hey what happened to itachi or mekura I think that's how you spell it?

Loved your story!