Awwwww. Huhu. And I thought Neji was alive in this story. But then, he left Tenten a son. Unlike in canon. Anyway, thank you!

Haha, neji is checking tenten out. Again, another idea that usually doesn’t happen and and when it does, it is usually the opposite around. Tenten is not so oblivious to him doing so then

This was such a unique and cool idea.

Ssooo, is there a second date? Wow, tenten sure has balls to tell neji this was one of the worst dates she ever been on. Like how you included the ex boyfriend, a bit of a twist really

Who knew neji could be so straightforward in asking for a date

“Im scouting the enemy”, I love that line. Was so appropriate for the situation but I wouldn’t thought about using it. Love how something simple as beating someone to their favourite seat could lead to a relationship/friendship possibly budding

You hit me at a weak spot. Even though coffee house stories are such cliches, I absolutely love them. Probably because I’m a coffee junkie myself. Love, love, love this one shot. Hope you decide to do that follow up!

Really cute one shot. Loved the rain and nejiten so this was awesome!

As much as I love nejiten, it’s not really a far fetch idea that tenten likes Lee in the series, they do sometimes argue like a couple. Surprise that you got Lee to marry Hinata in the end, don’t think I see that coming. Like the ending when it was revealed that neji was waiting till Lee was not available to kiss her

Dammit, when she just randomly asked that question with no sadness or remorse whatsoever, really thought neji was alive. Though it’s not so much a sad story, it’s kinda heartbreaking that neji asks tenten whether they still be together after the war, and him dying like that. Such a shame that he never saw his daughter.

It’s kinda weird reading this cause a lot of your oneshots in this collection has been based on the series haha. Really enjoyed this one. A fan of your long one shots, they’re always a great read. Can see neji really being a attorney, the job suits him

I loved how Tenten described him as a person. It was the perfect thing to say to him after those asshole elders verdicts. When situations gets passionate, it’s usually fun to read haha but I really enjoyed this change where the boy or girl doesn’t give into temptation. I really love how a lot of your stories don’t involve neji and tenten jumping into a relationship and taking things too fast cause let’s be honest, most real love stories don’t happen like that haha

I like how this turned out. How it went from being a romantic scene with a wife/husband or girlfriend/boyfriend to Neji wanting to correct what’s wrong about tradition

I like how the whole feeling of the one shot is very serene. Despite the death of Tsunade, her emotions weren’t overly done. I just really like how your one shot reflects the tranquility of the rain

Your warning was greatly appreciated. You did a good job making me tear up, especially after the comment about finding each other in the after life