| Reviews for Return to Aysel: Another Grimm Tale |
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Cindy chapter 21 . 3/9 I love the ending! |
Cindy chapter 17 . 3/9 No...I have never cried this hard from a book. |
Cindy chapter 9 . 3/9 No. Way! How did you come up with the Spell of Resurrection? |
Cindy chapter 5 . 3/8 Endymion and Darien?! Now the story's picking up! I really hope that they end up being the same person though. I'd hate to see Serena's heart broken because she had to pick one of the two. |
MoreThanTheMoon chapter 17 . 7/22/2019 Oh soooo many tears! |
tigerlily124 chapter 21 . 6/9/2019 Good story! Thank you very much! |
MyIndy13 chapter 21 . 9/14/2018 So I have been relentlessly binge-reading this series for the last week. It's had me heartbroken and elated. I've laughed out loud and shamelessly cried. You have a gift! I've seen your novels in the store, but never put two and two together till I started reading your author's notes. I can't wait to buy the series! I've read everything you have published here (this series is by far my favorite), but they've all been wonderful! I'm sad they're all over, but glad to know you have great works waiting for me out there! |
haruka-usagi-forever chapter 21 . 8/9/2018 I just want to say, I finished the two books for your Grimm Tale a bit of time ago, but never found the time to review for the two stories. These two stories had become one of my top favorites and I loved the way your added in twists like how Serena actually had a story herself. I loved the way how Endymion and Darien slowly fell in love with her. And how Melvin is always a light bulb, lol. These stories will always remain in my heart and I will never forget how good it was and the emotions I felt readingI cried in some scenes. Maybe if you wouldn't mind, you can have a new story but set after this one? Almost like a sequel to a sequel where ChibiUsa has her own adventure? Where she learns about her mother and father's adventure thru stories but then experience something similar herself? It would take a lot more characters tho, but I think it would be interesting to read if you do take the idea. |
Androzani84 chapter 21 . 9/4/2017 A great story, with a good conclusion. |
thecagedsong chapter 20 . 2/23/2017 Ouch, my heart. Ow. I did not expect you to do that with the Little mermaid. Ouch. Gosh, i'm going to cry, that story always made me cry. She was the princess whose prince failed her. Who fell in love with the prince who fell in love with another. That was always the ending to her tale. ow. Whose love was great enough that she would rather kill herself than kill her love. ow. |
thecagedsong chapter 4 . 2/23/2017 YES! I had been hoping this time around Darien and Melvin would get to come! I hope Melvin and Molly get together! On to the next chapter! |
bluesailorcat14 chapter 21 . 6/20/2015 It was sooo beautiful! Haha! Melvin and an elven princess.. I love it! I loved the scene with Endymion (even though I was an emotional wreck) of course nothing can displace my love and overall shock for "The House on Thornrose Lane" but you created another masterpiece. Darien..haha..at first I hated his lack of heroism or even arrogance like Endymion..but.. I did love that he cared and was willing to die for Serena ,but still I'm shocked that Darien and Endymion were two different people. However, I find it amusing for there being a lack of courage and stamina in Darien, in spite of being an average, yet dashing teenage, college student. I did miss Trista the singing harp.. And Michiru, the spoiled little princess..but I thought the story really mended Serena's heart as well as mine (and quite possibly your audience as well.) I, of course favor Endymion and I cannot forget his kindness in your first story of Aysel , but as much as I don't love heart-wrenching, tragic endings, you used the melancholy elements in the best way. I love the idea of a second shot at romance, and quite possibly Darien could be a part of Endymion as much as the youngest prince could be a part of him. However, I was surprised that Serena did not lose her role as guardian, but also a little unnerved that she could have her own story. Is it because Darien is not a part of the fairytale world? Or because fate truly twisted itself to befit Serena and her love's wishes? Either way.. I was looking for a gigantic sacrifice for true love or something at the end..but..seeing Darien and Serena in each other's arms is very consoling. You make me yearn for my own Endymion/Darien! Darn it! Where do you get so much heartfelt inspiration for these stories? Even your fanfiction pieces have become the pinnacle of my entire fanfiction reading experience. You truly have a gift. Your creativity and originality, amazing. Also, thanks again for the romantic relief at the end of all the bloodshed ( my heart stopped when Serena, Amy and Cytherea died, but they were revived so, whew.) So without further adieu.. Thank you for sharing such a fantastic story with the world. Keep writing. Second best story ever read. You may not see this comment as it has been nearly seven years since you last updated this story, but I hope one day you may stumble upon this review and read my rambling thoughts. It would be much appreciated but not necessary as you are probably a famous writer. So without further adieu (this time I mean it) thank you for writing a story that is fictional, but that has greatly touched my heart and given me a new feeling of fairy tale, yet real hope in life. |
bluesailorcat14 chapter 17 . 6/19/2015 How dare you toy with my heart!? I'm in tears! Endymion! Isn't he a part of Darien... ? My heart is being pulled.. I love Darien..but Endymion you have made irreplaceable and I can't let him go! Please mend the pain I feel! Coming from the heart of one of your most recent, emotional, dramatic reviewers.. |
SereStarOfGaea chapter 17 . 4/27/2015 I decided to post on this chapter because it had hasthe most meaning... The goodbye a declaration of true Love... And having to move on... There is a song that im remainded of Everytime I think about a goodbye... 'I think the Hardest part of holding on is letting it go' ... You Have given me a little hope and renew muy faith that Maybe just Maybe.. Even though you are not meant to have a happy ever after... You can Still manage to get one when you least expect it... And it doesnt have to be a Prince.. I do Sometimes wish life can be a fairy tale and we all Live hapilly ever after but I guess that is not how life is and I guess that is the beauty of it, we can choose who to Give our heart to and have free will... Thank you for reminding me to have hope and giving me a great time reading your stories! I hope you get to read my comments on both your stories and I how your doing great... |
ssteph chapter 21 . 4/11/2015 Oops forgot to log in for my previous review. I must admit that I also prefered Endymion to Darien and remember wishing that their souls could merge pr something of the sort. Still a great story though! |