When will you update the next chapter? I want to know what happens. And i want more lemons between Kaiba and Yami love the story

Mind blowingly erotic.

I want you to write to it
it really nice

Man, I did not like Jonouchi at all in this chapter. Yami comes home and says he can't go through with it, and Jou supports him in the last chapter only for Jonouchi to basically sell Yami to Kaiba when Kaiba puts the amount up?! It's one thing letting Yami do it when he was willing to, but then having Jonouchi offer Yami against his will when Yami has shown he doesn't want to go through with it previously is just plain terrible. Kaiba isn't much better, but at least he probably wouldn't treat a lover as a commodity to be bought or sold!

This was posted a long time ago now so I don't know if you will read this PM, but I just wanted to say: I really do think Yami was raped. The 'It's not rape because they enjoyed it' rationalisation is terrible and poisonous as far as I'm concerned, because it's possible for the body to want one thing and the mind another, especially for men, who tend to be more sensitive and biologically want to finish more than women do.

I wasn't too sure if you believed that or if it's just something the characters have talked about, but it's a trend I see a lot in fanfiction and it makes me sad.

The writing itself is fine; it's punchy and readable apart from maybe a typo sentence towards the end, I just wanted to get that off my chest.

Next chapter cause I need to know what is going to happen next.

Interesting now update already

I want faster updates, evidently!

OMG... this is sooo much an awesome story... D I love how you first made me ship Yami and Jounochi, then quickly made me come back to prideshipping... )

each time Jounochi hit Yami, I just want to strangle him and always wonder why the hell I can't do that...

please update soon... I can't barely wait for the next chapter... 3 please let Yami end up with Kaiba... )

Oh my gosh it's been awhile since you up-dated! T-T I hope you up-dare soon, this is a good story.

This actually seemed a bit slow. Prolly cuz there wasn't much Seto-Yami interaction going on. That being said I'd like to see Yami go with Seto. There I said it. I have made a demand. :P lol I can't wait to see how this all unfolds! xD Update! you haven't done it since 09!

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A great story! Can't wait for next chapter! Hope it will be soon

Nuuuu! There's no more! D: I friggin' love this D: OMG I can imagine Kaiba and Joey walking into Yami's room and becaus of his dream, Yami freaks out :P lol this is awesome, PWEASE carry it on D:

OMG YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS! :O Why is it always the epic stories that don't get finished? DX

Jou you JACKASS! How dare you hit Yami! At first, I would have been happy with either Jou OR Kaiba getting Yami, now i'm strictly Prideshipping! :O