r u going to continue?

The effort you've put into all this amazes me. The ideas and thought.. I really hope you can continue this sometime. Probably not, but.. I can hope.

Oh wow. Noah is so cute, with his descriptions of Cody, but Ezikiel is getting on my nerves. Which is most likely intentional.

There was so much going on in this chapter, and at the end, that I forgot the parts I was going to review on. It was all so great!

I love this story so much, and I seriously hope you update, really, really soon.

First off, I loved the reference to Nine Inch Nails with the Trent part. That was awesome.

Anyway, I liked how the POV's were changed, and especially from Ezekiel's, because I totally didn't see him being a main character.

Also, the ideas on the whole "Noah reading too much" were well thought out.

Typing this review, I realized that this chapter is pretty tame, considering Cody's a skizo. Drama in the next chapter? I'm definitely going to continue reading this, no matter what. You're such a good writer!

Woah. I was hesitant to read this story because it had a lot of words, and not THAT many reviews, but this is really awesome so far, and I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Please please PLEASE continue this! It's so intriguging I just want to keep reading!

Wow, this fic is...amazing. I'm surprised it doesn't have more reviews. It's only such a shame it hasn't updated in such a long time.

My god! Where is #4!

Hey just wondering, but is this story on hiatus or something? I love it, you should keep on writing :]

Hey, it's HSprisoner from deviantart. Wow, whether your story is on fanfiction or on deviantart, you're writing never ceases to blow my mind. It's superb. I really hope you stick with this story. I know it must be difficult with school and other important real life stuff, but I've seen too many fanfics with great potential that were never finished. By all means, take your time to make the next chapter however you want, but I'm just so excited to see how this story will turn out. Keep up the oustanding work!

Aw, I love this story. Not only did you betray Izzy (my favorite pyscho) perfectly, but you made everything seem believable. Especially Cody's little group he formed.

*worship*

Wow . . . this is the greatest NoCo story I've ever seen! I love it! Great characterization, fluency, and realistic speculation, not to mention an exciting plot I'm literally biting my nails in anticipation for! Do update soon!

Aw... poor Cody.

*Sigh* I envy you and your ability to make chapters delightfully long.

Making Chef the Coach was an awesome idea!

I think I've said this before, but you have really amazing imagery skills. Chef was really IC with the whole speech about his 'war days' or something like that...

Actually, all the characters are mostly IC. I like the explanation of Heather, too, with the 'lemons, limes, and slime' thing!

Tyler in his pink uniform is funny as well.

And on one last note:

I LOVED THE LEMMINGS SIMILE!

It made me very happy~

i like it! please update soon

Again great job nice chap.

i would like to give you this cookie as thanks for a great story.

Its great how you defined the characters i ecspecially like trents ocd (no offense if anyone has it)

the others were also great and noah is funny like the way you did him. Izzy is funny and nice job the way you make her noticing things that other ppl cant.

hope you continue your story. cant wait to get to the chapter where duncan is unleashed lol