LOOOOOOOOVE IT NEXT ONE NOW!

aww... pls make the next one soon! :D

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Update then, it's been over a month!

I hardly read anything of your story beyond the first chapter and the summary, but I have a few things to say. This story is ILLEGAL!

First off, if you're using Maddie Fitzpatrick from The Suite Life than the pairing wouldn't be Joshley. That implies Ashley Tisdale. You are using the character, NOT THE ACTRESS! You are also using the Jonas Brothers, who had nothing to do with Camp Rock. They played characters in Camp Rock, that's it, and fan fiction involves using the characters. Using real people is not allowed according to the Terms of Service, which you agreed to. Those stories were banned long ago for good reason.

Not every star might take the idea of being written about in fan fiction well. Some might, but others might sue. The same can be said of the Jonas Brothers. Remember, this site is a free service, we don't pay anything and to put real people stories is dangerous and could end up shutting this site down. Even if they didn't win the suit, the money involved in fighting would be enough. Do you really want to risk shutting down this site which has been given to us as a gift? You can't know for sure that the JB won't sue, or their agents won't sue if they ever see anything they find would be bad for the image of their stars. Disney does have an image to protect, especially for it's superstars.

Besides, fan fiction is supposed to be about the characters, not the actors.

You make it seem like the character of Maddie Fitzpatrick is playing a part in a show, that is not right.

Your use of pure dialogue is also illegal according to the TOS. It also looks really bad.

A story is meant to describe things to the reader because they can't see the action. It is meant to create an image in the reader's mind, to help them see what the author sees. This is merely words and does nothing to property describe, or give any clue to the emotions of the characters. I know one story that wrote in script form, but it was written like a TV script and provided descriptions of actions, emotions, and so on. It still allowed the reader to imagine how things would go, like an actor trying to learn the part.

I am reporting your story to the administrators. You either need to take it down or they eventually will. I am giving you a fair warning.

I LOVE this story! This one's one of my fave's and I was wondering when ya were gonna updatee! Love it!

Can't WAIT!

yahh you have been foucus on another story "lovers or rivals" taht's why and i forgive you

by the way you've got more story that you haven't finished yet

.GOD.

i really dont even remember how i found this story, but i did, and i thought "hey, why not read it and give it a shot?"

once i finished the first chapter, i was hooked. and like Maddie and Joe did with each other, i fell in love with this story. It's completely AMAZING! please, please, PLEASE update this soon! i must know what happens!

and of course this is going into my favorites!

love, jenna

I really love this story! Please make the next onee!

amazing and sad

aw thats soo cute.

so sad.

i loved it

so cute!

i loove it!

aw soo saad (

I love this story *-*

You're so awesome :)

I love your storys. :)