Reviews for Unexpected Abuse
Empressmarcy chapter 5 . 3/29
When Mr. Lancer asked “what really happened.” I almost cried
Guest chapter 16 . 12/18/2019
this story is still really compelling, even if its been abandoned.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2019
Well dang. Understanding about the "no sleep" part though.
ThatCoolGuy chapter 1 . 11/9/2019
Oof could you please bring this back? or at the very least tell me how it ends? I've been in love with this story for ages and understand if it's to much to finish but I'm really curious how it ends
Guest chapter 16 . 9/18/2019
such a good story! hope you're doing well 3
SofiPhan29 chapter 16 . 7/21/2019
Awesome! Continue! PlEaSe
DJmiso chapter 16 . 7/9/2019
do you know how amazing this story is!? i dunno if you did go back to edit, but imo, this was very well written and enthralling. it’s hard for me to picture danny’s dad as abusive, but there are those that can convince me if given a good enough reason. i can see jack reverting to attachment issues when maddie’s gone, he can be such a child. i wonder if he even realizes that he’s been abusive to danny. i hope you come back to add more chapters to this story if it hasn’t already been completed. yer a very talented writer, and it’s difficult finding well written stories on this site, sad to say. thanks for sharing what you have with us so far! looking forward to seeing what you have in the future.
Guest chapter 16 . 6/17/2019
tfw you find your new favorite fic and it hasn't been updated in five years
PeanutCAT13 chapter 16 . 4/11/2019
Jesus Danny got the shot beaten out of him, I dont know how you can do that to a character. Hopefully he come around, I'm on vlad's side this time even if I dont like him lmao
Scarbreathaway chapter 16 . 3/20/2019
I loved them!
Snowdrops and Rainclouds chapter 16 . 1/26/2019
Oooooof this is a good. Danny getting help from getting out of a toxic situation, but with all the anger and denial that comes from it, him worrying about the repercussions on his family and Jazz, Sam, and Tucker reassuring that there already are consequences, from the moment Jack started acting like that, the concern of Vlad and willingness to train to protect, just all the support Danny has to get away from someone that’s harming him is wonderful, thank you so much for sharing this
Guest chapter 16 . 12/18/2018
Hawt diggidy damn. Never got the chance to finish (or at least update) this huh? Well, own decisions, I guess. Pretty bummed though.
Guest chapter 7 . 10/18/2018
*blinks* okay then.
GhostlyPhantom chapter 16 . 10/4/2018
plz update
Minna cross chapter 16 . 7/2/2018
Oh my goodness! Your story is so addicting! I had to finish before I went to sleep (it is now 5 in the morning). Good job, I hope you updated this story.
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