Nice chapter...somehow I knew Evil Link was joking! He's funny, I admit.

I noticed that you tend to confuse the homophones 'you're' and 'your'. You use 'your' often. Don't forget that you're is the same as you are, therefore, in some cases, instead of using 'your okay' you should put 'you're okay'. The word 'your' is a possesive term so as to say 'your stuff' or something like that.

I also noticed that you mix the present tense with past tense. I think you should stick with either one or the story tends to get confusing, in my opinion. Great chapter! This one was longer than the others, that's a hint of improvement and expansion of sentences.

So far this is great. Evil Link is really funny, that joke about Zelda being pregnant, F-ING HILARIOUS. Evil Link and Link should team up and kick some ass later on, that'd be cool.

UPDATE MORE SOON!

Ganondorf...what an a-hole! I'm surprised Link could still limp, and I'm surprised he ended up with Nabooru. What a great story!

Oh my god! Ganons back...of course. I liked this chapter. Please publish the next chapter soon! Lucas is an a-hole! If Link doesn't wear green anymore, what does he wear?

Cool! I'm really liking your story! I'd like to see what'll happen next. Great job! Hmm...to be honest, I didn't think you went for Zelda-Link romance. Do you? Anyway, I'd love to read the next chapter!

I like your story. Evil Link's funny, in my opinion...I have no idea why, but he just seemed funny. I'd like to read more of your story.

Interesting...is the story based on Link's point of view? And , clearly, this is a summary of all that's happened. I'd like to read more about this.