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I loved the counting down of Sync's life, and how he only thinks of Arietta, how tragic and sad and fluffy and how very YOU!

"Cared for. Where was Ion when her mother died?" This line for some reason is the most tragic to me.

~Jen

I'm sorry, Arietta. I couldn't be Ion for you..To be honest I don't like that line coming from Sync.I loved how you made Sync so...Sync

Nicely written, I enjoyed the stylised writing and selective language. the imagery of it was also very good because it didn't contrast with the tempo of the story, and like many stories like this often don't do: you managed to hold the tense and viewpoint throughout

It's well written, though it IS still a bit OOC though. Sync's cool, but the relationship between him, the 7th Ion, original Ion and arietta is a bit too complicated to take to the theme well.

(maybe i overthought this review)

this was amazing it was great love it

O_O nice. :D

Wow. You are an absolutely amazing writing!

I love the way that you worded everything because you can completely understand how he's feeling. It's a little sad though-the ending.

lol, the was certainly an entertaining fic. Truth be told I enjoyed it despite how sad it turned out. The emotion conveyed was great and OoCish is fine imo 3! Well, done and tnx for sharing a sync x arietta fic !