| Reviews for I am Edward Cullen’s Fiancée |
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   Anonymous1511 chapter 5 . 6/15 Hi! I found this story from a fiction site and decided to give it a try, because the summary looked so promising. However I'm sorry to say that I couldn't get past the 5th chapter. There are lots of unbelievable facts in this story. First off, no one can just take back a scholarship like that without advanced notice. Bella can sue the college if that was the case. Second, no restaurant gives a 3 months advance to their employees just like that and what right minded person would ask for a 9 months advance ? Also I don't like how this Bella is being such a pushover but maybe that's how you intended her be at the beginning and she'll transform later. To top it all off, there's quite a lot of grammatical errors that could have been fixed by a simple spell and grammar check. This is simply constructive criticism. You can correct all of the above points if you reread this story and engage a good beta. This will then definitely be a great read. |
| Guest chapter 40 . 4/25 This is an truly amazing story! I shed a lot of tears while reading it, thank you so much for writing this :) you are a really talented writer and i was hooked from the start of reading it . Amazing! |
| JustMePMM chapter 40 . 1/3 Thanks for sharing |
| JustMePMM chapter 39 . 1/3 awww that was an awesome finish, I wasn't sure how you were going to pull it off but well done you! Loved your story |
| JustMePMM chapter 23 . 1/2 Too funny, I love it well done |
| JustMePMM chapter 18 . 1/2 Your story line, characters and content are great looking forward to reading on |
| Guest chapter 19 . 1/2 Yay Edward |
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/2 Aawwww such a cute romance developing I think |
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/1 I wonder if you've gone back and re read your story the content and story line is really awesome! I'm smiling at how excited you were when you had 45 reviews |
| M. Cullark chapter 39 . 10/9/2019 Even though I love Edward and Bella together. I still think this Edward didn't deserve Bella, he just go and ask her to marry him before he even tries to make up for his mistakes first? |
| M. Cullark chapter 38 . 10/9/2019 I really don't think Edward at this point deserves another chance. He has done NOTHING for Bella. Absolutely NOTHING. |
| Guest chapter 38 . 7/26/2019 Your story is stupid jealous down! What a load of crab n a waste of time.. Geez |
| Bedward2922 chapter 10 . 10/8/2018 U should do more chapters in this story. Really amazing |
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/11/2018 This story is a total shit show, im embarrassed for you. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/11/2018 Id leave too if my waitress was like bella. She told him "your order would be here in 5 minutes"...depending on what? She said it WOULD be here in 5 minutes not it WILL be here. See the difference? And really? Who orders cream of mushroom soup and lemonade? Gross |
