If I told y what I would like to do to Renji I would be put in jail. Roflmao.

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Hm...well.

I can think of several things that might happen at this point...though only one will happen.

I lul'd...at the chapter description. Oh my...{sigh}

Is it just me or is there a titch of Vampire Knight crossover?

By the way, you have an extra comma near the last few paragraphs.

Eh? No chapter? Oh wait, never mind, I found it...{sweatdrop}

Ah...seems like an interesting situation to be in. I think I'll keep reading.

Oohh! A sequel, those are fun! Can't wait to read it!

Yay, cake! *huggle*

Yay! You're back! I missed this story :D

Great chapter!

aahh! can't wait to see what happens! i think i like this story better than chocolate and ramen (not together of course)am excited for the next chapter :D

i love this story. it's so interesting and well written. can't wait for the next chapter! i'm hooked :D

...I like it xd

And it's hard to say anything more, because the story hasn't started yet. Nevertheless you depicted protagonists quite good so I expect that you will write some nice chapters soon;]

I like it.

That was my whole review.

Lol, jk jk. Like it so far, good job with your OC description. Can't wait for the next chapter.

ohh, i wonder how the next chapter will play out. i'm eagerly anticipating it. great job so far

i really like were this story is going. it's interesting and actually grasped my attention. great job :)