Reviews for Light of Day
Anne Shirley Cullen chapter 35 . 12/30/2018
So far love this story
bbnbob chapter 66 . 3/15/2016
Loved it. Read in 30 hrs including sleep and work cause i couldnt put it down.
bbnbob chapter 39 . 3/15/2016
I know im late but of course you can bite with out infecting with venom. Edward did it for bella in Twilight and he did it for Jacob earlier when he has sucking the venom out.
Guest chapter 59 . 7/14/2014
This is sick no real story line just sex you should maybe switch to porn !
Guest chapter 44 . 7/14/2014
Your a pervert all this is about is sexxx its porn
half-bloodprincess22 chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
I really like it! Maybe take out some of the character description, since people have hopefully read the book. :)
Ellie.Layla chapter 43 . 11/24/2012
I thought Nahual's father is called Joham.
AstrologyQueen chapter 13 . 10/19/2012
i love your idea and the story is really good, but the diction is juvenile. the word choice is very...kiddy i should say. i know this is a very informal piece of writing but the sentence structure should be a little bit more...mature. Like i said, love the concept, but the juvenile choices of words and the poor sentencestructure is distracting.
sindhura chapter 51 . 4/25/2012
its jacob ephraim black. there are so many spelling mistakes sometimes its difficult to follow
sindhura chapter 16 . 4/24/2012
i thought kristen was embry's imprint
sindhura chapter 19 . 4/24/2012
how can aro leave volturi? he is the head of the volturi and nahuel's father is joham not yohan. and in bd its decided that joham will be found and murdered by the volturi right?
rxl03b chapter 66 . 12/23/2011
This was a good story. I really enjoyed reading it but you need to get a good editor. There were so many little mistakes and typos that could have been prevented.
Noble Korhedron chapter 66 . 5/3/2011
Great story. Period! Starting 'Daybreak' now! :-)
lzytigger chapter 47 . 2/20/2011
thought Jacob was on lock down
gianna.v123 chapter 66 . 2/18/2011
I luv ot
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