So far love this story

Loved it. Read in 30 hrs including sleep and work cause i couldnt put it down.

I know im late but of course you can bite with out infecting with venom. Edward did it for bella in Twilight and he did it for Jacob earlier when he has sucking the venom out.

This is sick no real story line just sex you should maybe switch to porn !

Your a pervert all this is about is sexxx its porn

I really like it! Maybe take out some of the character description, since people have hopefully read the book. :)

I thought Nahual's father is called Joham.

i love your idea and the story is really good, but the diction is juvenile. the word choice is very...kiddy i should say. i know this is a very informal piece of writing but the sentence structure should be a little bit more...mature. Like i said, love the concept, but the juvenile choices of words and the poor sentencestructure is distracting.

its jacob ephraim black. there are so many spelling mistakes sometimes its difficult to follow

i thought kristen was embry's imprint

how can aro leave volturi? he is the head of the volturi and nahuel's father is joham not yohan. and in bd its decided that joham will be found and murdered by the volturi right?

This was a good story. I really enjoyed reading it but you need to get a good editor. There were so many little mistakes and typos that could have been prevented.

Great story. Period! Starting 'Daybreak' now! :-)

thought Jacob was on lock down

I luv ot