Reviews for Kallen of the Resurrection
Lux Sumomo chapter 1 . 5/1
This is an enjoyable story. I realized it has been more than a decade since you have updated this, but I hope you will find back your passion and continue writing this wonderful story. How about go watch the latest Resurrection movie? :)
FalconRukichi chapter 8 . 4/19/2012
WOW! actully this story pretty depressing and have a good plot. i like how you make the miserable and chaos in this story~ kalulu's relationship grown beautifully. hope one day, you will have a heart to contunue this story back~
Lenkish chapter 8 . 12/12/2011
I really enjoyed this story, and it's a shame that it's dead. Some of your politicking could get a little confusing, but it still managed to be compelling. Code Geass was always a crap-sack world, and there really is no reason that the aftermath of the show would be any different. Your choice of Carine as empress was unique, and having Suzaku become the primary antagonist was a very clever plot twist. The few complaints I have are mostly centered around questions that would have been answered later in the story, but alas it seems like those later day chapters will never be. Regardless, this was a good read and I am grateful to you for sharing it with the internettubes.
random person chapter 4 . 2/12/2010
I like it so far, kinda. But all the detail is confusing my brain
HarunaNiwa073 chapter 8 . 12/18/2009
very interesting, i want to know where all this will end up! update soon
Xun chapter 2 . 9/15/2009
I sense a heavy dose of P4 in this. :p

This is good stuff, nice descriptions you have going, and thanks for toning it down since the first chapter.
thia chapter 8 . 9/13/2009
can't wait for the next chapter...

how long will the next chapter release?
chocomoco21 chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
I love this story! I'm definitely adding this to my favorites! :D
alighthawk chapter 8 . 8/28/2009
An update, yay!

This was a enjoyable chapter, well worth the wait. Now I understand of how Suzaku is slowly going bonkers as he looks to take the world down with him.

I was alittle surprised that u created a sibling of Rolo. He wasnt one of a my fav chars of the series but I;m curious to see what role u will have for him. Update soon!
Jeremiel chapter 7 . 8/27/2009
I'll have to agree with some of the other readers that you may want to work on the way you refer to people, or the lack of referring to people at some points. You often mix what someone says with what a different someone does in the very same sentence with nothing but the period or quotes to distinguish that something is occurring in the same time period. This is caused by as someone stated, by referring to people in simplified terms. It really does not detract from the story to see characters names attached to their words or actions, but it does detract when you are calling people by 2 different names like such in the complex. Half the time you couldn't tell who was doing what where in the complex at any given moment. Other than that the only other real thing that i could give constructive criticism of is the various grammatical errors that pop up relatively often. The suggestion I give every time I see it is: don't use spellchecker. EVER! xD It's a terrible system that will VERY often miss grammatical errors, such as spelling a word one way when the meaning you want is spelled a different way, or misplaced commas, quotes, hyphens, what have you. Take the time to really sit and read trough your work in a word processor. Most have the tried and true "red-underline-of-death" that tells you a word is miss-spelled, or the green one when it will find a syntax/grammatical error. Hell even Firefox web-browser has this functionality in everything that has to do with typing. If you can't figure out the right spelling/grammatical use, just right click, and poof, instant-fix. Anyway I'm done with the constructive criticism part. Over all a very good story that will have me at least have me periodically checking back to see if the next chapter is up. Just might wanna kick back the complete OOC of a great deal of the characters a little bit. While it makes an interesting backdrop to the new twist on the story, as someone said: it completely destroys how we envision the characters as they should be. They don't gotta be Canon, but they shouldn't be THAT drastically different with only a years time...Ok so now the constructive criticism part is over xD. Cheers!
alighthawk chapter 7 . 8/4/2009
Everyone seems so cautious around each other, but I guess its to be expected considering how things ended when Lulu was the zero/king. Still, it'll be nice if red and lulu let their guard down a bit later on.

still not used to reading Suzaku as a 'villian' but its nice to c he has some backbone, although it makes him sounds abit ooc, but thats cool.

look forward to the next chapter.
Peloponnese chapter 7 . 8/4/2009
Zero with Geass? That's something new; I'm looking forward to hearing the explanation behind that. A good chapter overall; I hope to see the next chapter soon!

-G. Wagers
Skull drool chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
i thought this was pretty good, but it kinda felt like you were trying to hard with the Lelouch/ C.C conversation. Overall nice job with the 1st person PoV
Escajunkie chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
This is kinda confusing. Your descriptions are rather vague an nebulous. I get that you are trying to get an emotional response and show just what the characters are feeling, but all I get is confused. Also it is extremely difficult to tell who is speaking when in the beginning conversation. This first chapter would probably turn away most readers.
Jojora chapter 6 . 7/22/2009
Thanks for the update. Really liking this story
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