You fucked up this story. Had a good idea, bombed it totally.

What the fuck are you playing at? All the shit Harry has to go through and now you make him get scolded by his mother?

I enjoyed reading this story. There is very little decent Harry/Gabrielle fan fiction. Keep going on this! I look forward to seeing more soon.

I enjoyed the story so far. I have to say that I couldn’t put it down. I look forward to reading more soon. Update soon please!

read a/n, hope everything goes well

Understood. Thank you for allowing us to know this. I pray that things may be better for you and yours soon. Please take your time.. there isn't any rush. We are patient.
Well... To be honest... _some_ of us are patient. :)

Understood.

Omake?: "You were supposed to come to me, and not to that ZOO that.. that.. ahem.. You have been, and may always be, my ward.. my 'nephew'.. and, if you would like to be.. my son.. Hadrian James Potter-Bones."

wow. what a garbage story. nothing happened. just a bunch of talking. little to no action. never even get to the pairings... just straight garbage

This is a most wonderful story. I like a Harry/ Gabby story almost as much as Harry/ Hermione stories. I'm sorry for Harry;s suffering, but I still like the story.
Thanks,
Ron Pate Traveler301

Okay, this story is retarded.

Vernon died too quickly.

Should have allowed Harry to torture him to death. Repay 15 years of abuse with all the pain he could summon. That would be justice.

This? This is robbing a victim of his just retribution.

Meh . . . just kill the Dursleys. Wastes of space.
All those who abuse children or stand by and allow children to be abused should be put to death.
Redemption after 15 years is stupid. Kill them all.

Pussy chapter, start for a pussy story

This story was a good idea, but reading it gave me whiplash.

It's twelve bloody muggles, not thirteen! its thirteen people, including Pettigrew, the supernumerary wizard. Why woun't people get it into their bloody heads?