So darn funny.

Oh my time to change her

I am loving your stories. I just forget to review.

I think I've only read 2 fanfics in which James is NOT a bad guy! And they were both all human stories. Although here, James thinks their pact is the vampire version of Bros B4 Hos. In his mind, EDWARD's the one in the wrong, because Edward is the one renegging on their deal.

I LOVED the "Tanya Take down" scene. Jasper isn't the only master strategist in the family! Actions have consequences!

Irritable Grizzzly has the best author’s notes ever. You are in good hands. Excellent writing, by the way, I’ll bet IG loves it.

I'm giving this one another Kudos!

That whole energy level crap is just that...CRAP

funny how bella had to fight off Tanya...and she fought off jake too. Why does bella always have to fight for her place with Edward? Edward is the whore, the one that has killed humans...seems like Edward should be the one fighting.

And I HATE that you have bella fighting off his old fuck buddies.

It seems to me that bella wasn't the one that should have fought that fight. It should have been Edward.
And it was wrong of Edward and his family to secretly watch bella attempt to get Tanya to back off through the one way mirror.

I didn't like Edward already and now having his girlfriend fight of his old whores isn't really making things better.

Edward should have got Tanya to back off, not bella.

Second instalment excellent! Great story development.

Jasper was really useless in this situation... He gift is really weak.

I liked this one too. Moving on to number 3. I like your writing and characterisation.

I am hoping he does not leave her

Honestly i could have done without Jacob