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Madmagusmax chapter 18 . 4/5 I have to ask, do you take requests? Because I have one that you may like. It is a Dragon Ball series and Ikkitousen crossover. If you take up this idea take each series of Dragon Ball as one story at a time while still being a crossover with Ikkitousen. The story series is rated T to M. Sayians and Dragons, The Power of a Thousand Part 1: The World of The Story. The world is a merger of the Ikkitousen and the Dragon Ball World with Goku still a Sayian who is just starting his adventures and when he meets Kokin and Hakufu who are children and eventually the rest of the Ikkitousen cast who end up helping Goku on his path and his adventures when you go into Goku’s teen years and into Ikkitousen proper before Dragon Ball Z and Dragon Ball Super. But their are three twists involved with the original Dragon Ball series. 1. All the Gods of Earth’s mythology and religions are real. This must happen when you go into Dragon Ball Super as that part of the Dragon Ball series is all about gods and divinity. When the Gods of myth and legend get involved make them have all the abilities of their legends and all their pop culture counterparts and their various incarnations and the characters that they inspired in pop culture and are as powerful from the viewpoint of the ancient cultures that worshipped them and can do anything that can be imagined with their spheres of influence but a creator deity of a mythology and religion is virtually omnipotent. Their only weaknesses are the ones found in their original religions and mythologies. The reason why many of the Gods of Earth are no longer active is because that after the Age of Myths and Legends they developed a non interference policy on the mortal world; at least for those that are still around. Some pantheons have moved on and gone into uncharted waters and created their own universes outside of Zeno’s authority and their universes are what the ancient people thought the universe was. All of the Gods of legend have ascended to a higher plane of existence beyond anything we have seen in Dragon Ball by mastering and perfecting both the Magic of their religions and Dragon Ball Magic along with Ki. How the influence of the Gods of Mythology being real applies to Kami and The position of The Guardian of Earth is this. The Guardian of Earth is thought to be the Monotheistic God but is nowhere as powerful as people think. The position of Guardian of Earth is one that all the Gods of Earth created to act as a messenger as well as be their emissary and ambassador to the Kai’s and Xeno and be the protector of the earth but the Guardian is still mortal hence why their are multiple Guardians but they all have God Ki. Also Shin and Old Kai are not the only surviving Supreme Kai’s from Majin Buu’s rampage. The Supreme Kai Avatars in Dragon Ball Heroes are here as actual characters and allies to the protagonists and they eventually become much stronger than Shin and Dabura. The Demon God Avatars in the Dragon Ball Hero games are here and they stronger then Dabura. 2. The main cast are children when you start the story and become teenagers when you go into the later parts of Dragon Ball and into Ikkitousen proper. All the characters are still teenagers when you go into Dragon Ball Z and their early to mid twenties when you go into Dragon Ball Super. It would allow Goku, Hakufu, and Kokin to bond and be true friends and Hakufu and Kokin can get tougher than in cannon by learning other martial arts styles. This really helps when you get into Dragon Ball Z and Dragon Ball Super and the rest of the gang also get more powerful to help. 3. All the Sayians in the Sayian Saga survive and turn good. Raditz turns good and evolves in power to keep up with Goku and Vegeta until he reaches Super Sayian 4 and he gets with Launch and has children with her. Nappa turns good and settles down with a lady and reaches Super Sayian and Super Sayian 2 but no more. Sayians and Dragons, The Power of a Thousand Part 2: The Growth of The Cast. Everyone is as cannon like as possible in their personalities and development. Now here is the growth of the Ikkitousen cast. All the characters of Ikkitousen gain all their cannon powers and abilities but here is more so that they can keep up. You must make the Ikkitousen crew seek out and train under Master Roshi, The Crane Hermit, Korin, Mister Popo, Kami, King Kai, the other Z Fighters and having their potential unlocked by Grand Elder Guru and going through the ritual of The Old Kai to awaken more of their hidden power and potential and have the last of their potential unlocked by drinking The Ultra Divine Water and they all survive! Sayians and Dragons, The power of a Thousand Part 3: The Powers of Son Goku. For Goku’s growth give him everything he has officially from across the franchise. Everything from all the movies, the manga, and the anime including filler that Goku has from Dragon Ball, Dragon Ball Z, Dragon Ball GT, Dragon Ball Super, and all the various forms Goku has from all the movies, the manga, and the anime. Now when the Ikkitousen cast tell Goku that he turned into a Oozaru and what he did to the Pilaf Gang’s Castle he realizes that he killed his grandfather and seeks to master that power as his form of atonement as well as self expression. When you go into the Android Saga Goku perfects Super Sayian and in the Cell Saga he unlocks Super Sayian 2. Son Goku now knows the danger of looking at the full moon and will continue to work until he controls and ultimately masters the primal powers within himself. When you go into the Buu Saga Goku gains Super Sayian 3 and learns about Super Sayian 4 during the Buu Saga from Old Kai and works to gain it and ends up mastering the Golden Oozaru form and he reaches Super Sayian Four and then goes several steps beyond by going into Super Full Power Saiyan 4. After further training Son Goku reaches the same level of power he had at the end of Dragon Ball GT at his best during the Buu Saga to destroy Kid Buu and save the Universe before going down the events of Dragon Ball Super. In Dragon Ball Super Goku gains and absorbs the God Ki and keeps it and obtains the Super Sayian God Form and Super Sayian Blue, and all the various forms in Dragon Ball Super in the anime and manga. Goku also gets Super Sayian Blue Kaio-Ken, Perfected Super Sayian Blue, and Goku can use Hakai like in the Dragon Ball Super Manga, Ultra Instinct Omen, and Ultra Instinct Sign and eventually fully masters Ultra Instinct without many of his drawbacks as Goku as he trained to overcome those weaknesses. Goku will have transcended his primal roots and ascended into divinity and would be the ultimate non legendary Super Sayian. Son Goku also gains the powers and abilities of his inspirations Sun Wukong from Journey to the West and Hanuman the Hindu Ape God from the Ramayana. Here are the powers of Sun Wukong. If I have missed anything that Sun Wukong can do in Journey to The West, Son Goku learns to do it. Super Strength: Sun Wukong's trade mark Compliant Staff is extremely heavy. Sun Wukong at his weakest could easily lift one ton and kill a tiger in a single strike after being imprisoned under a mountain for 500 years right after breaking the mountain he was imprisoned under in half. He could have lifted the mountain off him if the Buddha not placed a binding seal on the mountain. Son Goku cannot naturally bust mountains with brute force unless he goes Super Sayian or with energy blasts. In time he eventually can in this story! Not Quite Flight: Sun Wukong's cloud jumping allows him to reach the Celestial Heavens In a Single Bound or cross an ocean. Though he is capable of actual flight as well. Sun Wukong is able to cartwheel halfway across the world in a single leap. Goku can fly and teleport anywhere he can sense energy. He gains all the mobility of the Monkey King and his flight and teleportation abilities. Nigh Invulnerable and Complete Immortality: Sun Wukong after training under a Taoist Sage became functionally immortal and after that he wrote his name and several of the names of his subjects out of The Book of Life and Death becoming doubly immortal then he ate the fruit of immortality, the heavenly wine of the Jade Emperor and the pills of immortality. Sun Wukong survived being burned alive by a Fire that can kill immortals and became even stronger with nearly invulnerable steel like body with the elixir of immortality hardening in his body and after that he survived having a mountain dropped on him by the Buddha himself. The reason the Buddha dropped a mountain on him is because the gods failed in outright destroying him. Also when Sun Wukong was on his journey he found and ate the human faced fruit that made him even more Immortal and became truly and completely immortal when he ascended into the Heavens as a Buddha. Son Goku can take quite a bit of damage and as a Sayian he can keep his youth to keep fighting until he turns eighty and has come back from the dead more than once and so has some of his friends and enemies. Self-Duplication: One of Monkey's signature moves has him pulling out a bunch of his hair and blowing on them, resulting in each hair turning into a clone of him. But it did not drain the Monkey King. Goku can do that as well with the Multiform technique but it divides the strength of the user of the technique in proportion to the various amounts of copies. Son Goku learns to master both self duplication techniques but moves on and uses Sun Wukong’s version as it did not drain Wukong. Enlightenment Super Powers: Wukong’s magic comes from studying taoism and learning the secrets of the universe from his master. Son Goku also gains a form of enlightenment in cannon by mastering his life force. Goku gets all and in this story Goku learns to use Chi, the energies of Yin and Yang along with his Ki and Son Goku also ends up studying magic and unlocks and masters his chakras via Buddhist meditations and Hindu Yoga exercises with his cannon powers and gains new powers by studying Taoism and Dragon Ball Magic. Voluntary Shapeshifting: Allegedly 72 transformations, but in fact he can transform into whatever he likes. Son Goku is the king of transformations with the Ozaruu form, the Kaio-Ken and the various Super Sayian transformations. Son Goku gets all the transformations of Sun Wukong when studying Taoism and Son Goku masters the Ozaruu form, the Kaio-Ken and ends up getting all of his official transformations including all his official Super Sayians transformations from across the entire franchise. Mind over Matter: Sun Wukong is capable of telekinesis, and can make seemingly inanimate objects come to life. Goku’s ki gives him Telepathy and Telekinesis! New Powers as the Plot Demands: Monkey has a tendency to suddenly reveal often one-off powers or abilities without previous mention that conveniently solve the current problem. How many times did a Goku pull a victory out of nowhere? Trade Mark Weapon: Sun Wukong had an indestructible staff called the Compliant Staff aka the Ryu-Jingu-Ban that could expand all the way to the Heavens and retract and change it’s size. Under the Dragon King of the Western Seas it could control the worlds Ocean's and the Tides, was indestructible, and was able to measure and hold down the Milky Way Galaxy. Make sure Goku's Power Pole has those same abilities but Goku's Power Pole operates on mechanics like Mjölnir from its incarnation in Marvel Comics with only the pure of heart can lift and use. World's Greatest Warrior: Sun Wukong ate the start of his adventures defeated the 5 heavenly kings, four Constellations, three celestial armies, Nezha the Lotus Prince, and proved himself the equal of Erlang Shen. Sun Wukong then fought the heavenly army of 100,000 strong at the same time, ripped through heaven's greatest champions and not just survived everything they could throw at him, but HE GOT EVEN STRONGER. By the time he was punished by the Buddha he was on the brink of actually becoming the Emperor of Heaven himself. During the journey, Wukong is able to fight and defeat just about every Mook, Elite Mook and the Dragon of the Heavens, each said to fight like a god himself. Goku has fought Demons, Aliens, Androids, Gods, Dragon's, and in Dragon Ball GT Goku is the world’s greatest warrior in the universe in that timeline. Ascended to a Higher Plane of existence: Sun Wukong after the events of Journey to the West ascended into a Buddha. Son Goku does something similar as he is going to become a physical god and Goku ascends to a higher plane of existence at the end of Dragon Ball GT. Magic Eyes: Sun Wukong had special eyes that could see through all lies and illusions but had a little problem with smoke getting into them and they could also shoot laser beams all the way to Heaven. Speaks fluent animal: Sun Wukong could talk to animals. Horses to be precise. Speaking of new powers Goku also gains all the powers of Hanuman the Hindu Ape God. Hanuman is one of the supporting characters in the Hindu Indian epic story the Ramayana. In the Ramayana Hanuman is one of the kind and cheerful Vanara who first befriends Rama and Lakshmana. The Vanaras literally are a race of anthropomorphic monkeys capable of human speech. In the Ramayana they serve as the main allies of Rama, helping him in his quest to rescue Sita. Hanuman is the son of Vayu, the Wind God and is Sugriva's best friend. From then on, Hanuman becomes a superhero, always helping Rama and Lakshmana when needed the most. Nice Guy, Humble Hero, and All-Loving Hero: Hanuman is extremely humble, caring and friendly. Hanuman is humble to a fault. He never told Rama about himself and even leaves the venue out of embarrassment when the Sage Agastya starts telling Hanuman's backstory to Rama. Hanuman is of a very amiable personality. Something Rama and Sita appreciated very much. Goku is humble, not taking credit for his achievements, kind, pure of heart and is always going to give a second chance. Celibate Hero: Hanuman was not interested in having relationships, so he swore an oath of eternal Brahmacharya. However in the versions in Southeast Asia such as Thailand, he has a romance with the mermaid Suvannamaccha and conceives a son with her. Son Goku was not really interested in romance until he married Chi Chi. Dating Catwoman: In the Thai versions in particular, he has a romance with Ravana's daughter, Suvannamaccha, after she becomes his opponent for a time. His wooing of her and explaining the reason for the war on her father spurs her to pull a Heel–Face Turn. Goku has turned his enemies into his allies in cannon and in this story Goku can potentially have Ryofu Housen the series bad girl in his harem. Monkey King Lite: Hanuman isn't the same as the Chinese Monkey King Sun Wukong, but you can see the similarities. Some scholars think Sun Wukong may have been influenced by Hanuman. Monkey King Lite is characters who were influenced by Sun Wukong. Sun Wukong can be traced back to about 1000 years, and the Ramayana is even older. Son Goku is this Trope! Story-Breaker Power: Hanuman is immune to even the Brahmastra, which is equivalent to a nuclear weapon. He can fly all the way from Lanka to the Himalayas, uproot entire mountains and return to Lanka with the entire mountain in just one night. Goku is so strong that he can take on almost anyone and win! He has Energy blasts, Super powerful transformations, flight, teleportation, has a healing factor, can recover from grievous wounds and get stronger, be immune to radiation, has only been sick twice and Goku in Dragon Ball GT is the strongest warrior in the universe in that timeline! Superpower Lottery: As a child, Hanuman was blessed by the gods with Complete Immortality, shapeshifting, absolute invulnerability, super strength, perfect health and immunity from diseases, fire and drowning. See above. World's Strongest Man: Hanuman is so strong that he can lift entire Himalayan mountains and fly all the way to Lanka in one night. See above. Son Goku would come full circle on his development as a character and his abilities go even further by drawing more from his original inspirations. Son Goku would be the ultimate non Legendary Super Sayians and can serve as an example of what Universe 7 Sayians could have been and eventually has more powers from his inspirations. Because of this Goku is always a couple steps ahead of Vegeta. Sayians and Dragons, The Power of a Thousand Part 4: Parings. Goku unknowingly at first being Goku gets a harem with Chi Chi, Hakufu, Ryofu Housen, Kanu Uncho(Kanu is Bisexual in the Manga and in the English translation of the Manga was seen flirting with Koukin), and Gentoku Ryubi. Shinmei Ryoumou gets with Shishi Ouin, Yamcha gets with Chouhi after breaking up with Bulma. Koukin gets with Ekitouku, Bulma and Vegeta get together, Android 18 hooks up with Krillin. And Gohan gets with Videl. Other characters in the Ikkitousen cast can find love interests from either series so long as it fits their anime or manga cannon characters. Sayians and Dragons, The Power of a Thousand Part 5: The Ending and the Legacy of Goku. After Goku, the Z Fighters and some of the Cast of Ikkitousen win the Tournament of Power and face the Super version of Broly and put down Freiza they have to clean up the mess on earth because of overusing the Dragon Balls. The Shadow Dragons are born and run rampant on the Earth and they create a rift connecting the Earth to Hell furthering the damages to the planet. During this arc Goku gets all the remaining forms and transformations he has in Dragon Ball GT. After Goku and his companions defeat the Shadow Dragons, Goku has to leave the Earth with Shenron to protect the earth from people relying on the Dragon Balls and until the Earth can stand on its own without him and the Dragon Balls. To help the Earth evolve Krillin and Tien bring back the Turtle and Crane Houses of Martial Arts, Gohan when he is born and grows up writes the Ki Manuel’s from Dragon Ball Online, also he goes to New Namek to make the last three wishes that anyone will make on any set of Dragon Balls for a century. The first wish is to repair the Junk DNA in the Human Body to help the human race grow. For example Humans do possess the Genes to regenerate limbs, however, they are heavily mutated and are considered Junk DNA: Anti Heat Shock Protein 60 and Fibroblast Growth Factor 20 are in both humans and certain types of Zebrafish and Salamanders. Those with the mutant variants of the gene only get scarring. For animals with the functioning genes the cells around the wound site revert to their embryonic state and reform the lost part. The second wish is to repair the Earth’s environment and biosphere and the third wish is to make the energies of Magic and Ki more accessible to humans. Finally Hakufu and the Ikkitousen Cast open their own martial arts schools. What happens to Goku is something special. Goku is given credit for his accomplishment he is one of the youngest people to become a finalist in the World Martial Arts Tournament. During his adventures he takes down King Piccolo and is given credit as their were cameras and it was live and Goku wins a world martial arts tournament after defeating Piccolo Jr and is regarded as a hero. In the Cell Saga Goku defeats Perfect Cell and lives to tell the tale which he is rewarded for doing. At the end of the story Son Goku is regarded as a legend who helped save the world and some Hindu’s and Buddhists think that Son Goku is a Avatar of Hanuman the Hindu Ape God or is the reincarnation of Sun Wukong the Monkey King. Among the gods Goku is a hero who saved his planet and defeated some of the worst of his universe and helped save the multiverse. When Goku leaves Earth with Shenron he gains all the powers, invulnerability, immortality and abilities of Hanuman and Sun |
mauricio11 chapter 18 . 1/23 hope you update soon |
silverstreak93242 chapter 18 . 10/31/2018 Greetings, here's hoping that this review finds you well, and still writing! I just finished reading Vicissitude and am rather glad I gave it a chance to grab me, and pull me in! I enjoyed the plot, premise, and story line, and I must say, I am hoping that is story isn't dead, simply on hiatus until your muse finishes figuring out what to do next in the story! I am curious as to your having Ranma not being immune to heat, considering that the phoenix pill renders him immune to heat, even up to and including lava...I was just curious as to whether you made it so he didn't go through that part of the story line, or made the pill less effective regarding lava? As the author, that is totally up to you, I am just wondering! I am again, hopeful that you will be continuing this story at some point in the future, even if you don't have a definite ending planned at this point, after having to throw your original script out...if you are in the process of rewriting the story, then I look forward to reading the rewritten story! I also must say that in my honest opinion, though you gave Ku Lon a true mystical warriors death battle, with foregone result in her dying, I think honestly that in the end her demise was a little bit of a easy win for the bad guy, in this case Nyrissa, in that she didn't wind up with broken bones, or near death dealing injuries, and I am sure that she should have at least some of those after fighting Ku Lon, despite her magic shielding. I again, look forward to more of this story, and seeing how you tie all the relationships together for Ranma to be able to ultimately be happy, and wind up with the ones he already loves, and the ones he is coming to love, or should I say Care About, so that they all wind up with the one that has enough stamina to keep them all happy, and give Nodoka and Julia LOTS and LOTS of grandbabies! LOL, anyways, again, here's hoping that this LONG review finds you well, and still writing, and hopefully your doing great on whatever games your playing! |
MilandaAnza chapter 18 . 10/14/2018 I know you’ve moved on to other stories but been on a Gold Digger binge and really enjoyed this hope you pick it up one day! I’m still of the opinion it was meant to end as a harem Kas / Nab / Brit / Bri / Gin / Shei |
zmanjz chapter 18 . 10/9/2018 Cliffhanger! Great story, but hurt? Ranma? Ay? |
zaltran chapter 18 . 9/30/2018 Just read throught the entire fic again, what a great story. I hope your muse comes back and helps you write another chapter, I look forward to it. |
Midgardsormr Jr chapter 18 . 7/13/2018 Whelp, Here we are again. I spotted a few problems so I have to repost. But once again I have to ask, are you up for it? Now this story is still a Final Fantasy XIV and Gold Digger crossover with the rating for this story has to still be T and the genre of this story has to be Adventure/Friendship with elements of romance and tragedy. Aether Dragons and Golden Dragons Part 1: Midgardsormr's powers and abilities. Midgardsormr has to gain all the powers from all his incarnations across the Final Fantasy Franchise and have the powers he had in his prime before going to Hydaelyn and making the pact with Mother Crystal and all the abilities the pact provided him and the strength he had in his prime before coming to Eorzea and Hydaelyn and gets even stronger in his second life. Midgardsormr has to obtain all the powers of all his incarnations across the Final Fantasy Franchise including the ones Midgardsormr teaches the player in his Final Fantasy VI incarnation as an Esper but also the ones from the Gold Digger Comics species of Dragons as well as the powers of the Dragon's of the Type Moon Universe and all the powers of Bahamut's incarnations from all across the Final Fantasy Franchise and non Final Fantasy appearance's, The powers of the Dragon Hordes of Final Fantasy XIV, and finally he masters all the skills of the Final Fantasy XIV Job system with all the skills of all the classes from all the games. Midgardsormr can also take a human form, and change his size and eventually all the powers of eastern and western dragons in traditional stories. However Midgardsormr still has the weaknesses of the Dragon's of Final Fantasy XIV and he has to train and work hard to obtain the powers of all his incarnations in the Final Fantasy series, and master the classes of the Final Fantasy XIV Job System and the ones he had in his prime before coming to Eorzea and Hydaelyn. Aether Dragons and Golden Dragons Part 2: The Beginning of the Story. This story should take place after Final Fantasy XIV Storm Blood and Heavens Ward. Midgardsormr is offered a chance to be reborn in the ancient past of another World by Hydaelyn which he takes and Midgardsormr is reborn and placed into an egg. Midgardsormr's egg is found out side of the city of Civ-Alpha and is taken in by Exthilion himself after wondering how a Dragon egg that is not one of the creation's of the Saurian's or a modified clone of Exthilion like the First Generation of Dragons is outside of Civ-Alpha or how it even exists. After the Dragons take control over Civ-Alpha Midgardsormr grows up alongside Tm'at and Dreadwing and they grow to be close friends before Dreadwing goes evil and learns how to use his new powers and relearn his old ones. Midgardsormr has to be more powerful than a Platinum Dragon and eventually Exthillion himself. Aether Dragons and Golden Dragons Part 3: Midgardsormr's Primary Adventures. After The Great Cataclysm occurs and when the dragon Arkanaton created the "Sleep of Stone" to put the entire draconic race into hibernation until the crisis had passed. Many did not survive and Arkanaton himself has never awoken. But after the Cataclysm Midgardsormr using his powers resurrects all of the Dragons who did not survive and finds and awakens Arkanaton himself, and others who were never awakened and he along with his old friend T'mat speak to the spirit of the Earth and learns that they have to migrate to another world as this is not their world anymore as the spirit of the Earth wants them gone and sees them as unnatural monsters and threatens to cause another natural disaster to wipe out the draconic race if they do not leave. Midgardsormr, T'mat, and Exthilion make the rest of the Dragon Race to migrate to Jade where Midgardsormr makes a covenant with the spirit of the Jade Realm to allow the draconic race to stay in the Jade Realm which the spirit of the Jade Realm allows and lets Midgardsormr have his freedom and restores his memories of his previous life and the knowledge and memories of his past life and gives him the powers of the Dragon's of the Type Moon Universe to act as one of the Jade Realm's protectors and the powers of Bahamut's incarnations from all across the Final Fantasy Franchise and the powers of all Midgardsormr's incarnations across the Final Fantasy Franchise and in popular culture and in Norse mythology. Aether Dragons and Golden Dragons Part 4: Midgardsormr's Secondary Adventures. Midgardsormr has to become a Primogenitor of an entire race of Dragons by offer many Wurms and Drakes the opportunity to become the species of Dragons of both his lives which he is a hybrid of, The Dragon Hordes of Final Fantasy XIV, and The Gold Aether Dragons and also creating his own empire of Dragons that merges science and technology with magic and other mystical practices but his nation is an outlier unlike with the rest of the Jade Realm who do not adapt this synthesis. He must also be the one to become the father of magic and has spread his knowledge to the mortal races and all of dragon kind after learning and discovering almost all that their is to know about magic and has gotten even stronger over the centuries and over the years he spread the knowledge of the Final Fantasy XIV system of Magic, the Gold Digger System of Magic and the arts of combat of Hydaelyn in the Gold Digger universe. Aether Dragons and Golden Dragons Part 5: Midgardsormr's personality. Midgardsormr in his new life must be mischievous, care free, but also curious, compassionate, and rather mature for his age as a hatchling, but as he grows older he obtains the values of a mature man and becomes a more heroic character similar to Optimus Prime from the Transformers series(specifically Optimus Prime's incarnation in Transformers Prime). However when Midgardsormr get's the memories of his past life from the pact with the Jade Realms spirit and the powers of all of Bahamut's incarnations, the powers he obtained from the Pact with Hydaelyn, and the powers of the Dragons of Type Moon. Midgardsormr obtains his patient and enigmatic traits while also regaining his trademark patience and stoicism from Final Fantasy XIV and he speaks in a slow, deliberate monotone and exhibits archaic speech patterns that he uses in his position as Emperor of The Gold Aether Dragons and is once again the father of the dragon species of Final Fantasy XIV but this time in the Gold Digger universe of which he is the once again the progenitor of and which he is also King. Aether Dragons and Golden Dragons Part 6: Parings. Midgardsormr has to eventually fall in love and mate with a female Dragon one of the Female Dragons from the Gold Digger comics like Jane or Sue and eventually has a son named Arthus who is his heir and Arthus falls in love and hooks up with D'bra, T'mat's daughter and they eventually get married and finally the Digger Sisters find their cannon love interests Aether Dragons and Golden Dragons Part 7: Midgardsormr's impact on the Gold Digger's world. If you want to make a sequel series or take this story into Gold Digger's Cannon storylines Midgardsormr's impact of the Gold Digger world must be massive and when you go into cannon such as events that take place in the Jade Realm or circle around magic, the Dragon Race, and Dreadwing, Midgardsormr's legacy and impact must be felt throughout the sequel. To emphasis the legacy of Midgardsormr, Midgardsormr in the Gold Digger universe was the inspiration for the actual Midgard Serpent of Norse Mythology and for the inspiration of the legends and mythologies of dragons in the Far East on Earth. Midgardsormr when he hatched out of his egg in the early ages of Civ-Alpha brought Aether in the Gold Digger Universe. Midgardsormr also taught Merlin, The Wizard of Camelot everything he knew, and has fought the Umbra, an Eldritch abomination that seeks to devour all reality and with Midgardsormr's arrival in the Gold Digger Universe sees the Final Fantasy Multiverse as a tasty meal on more than one occasion. However in response to this Midgardsormr acts as one of the main defenders of both the Gold Digger and the Final Fantasy universes and helped found Agency Zero and their predecessors the Wonder Friends. Midgardsormr must play an active part in the arcs surrounding Dreadwing, The Dragon Race, Hydaelyn and Eorzea, Magic, and the Jade Realm. Midgardsormr's impact, legacy, and power is so massive that the mortal villains of the Gold Digger franchise are scared shitless of him! The only exception is Dreadwing as he took T'mat and Midgardsormr's decision to take the Dragons to the Jade Realm as an act of personal betrayal and Dreadwing is the only dragon who has the guts to constantly challenge Midgardsormr for his title of The Greatest Dragon of All Time and to try and take what he thinks as well deserved revenge. In those arcs as Midgardsormr has to become the expert and main authority of Magic and Dragon kind and a massive obstacle to the forces of evil as he has become a Godlike Dragon and is hailed as The Greatest Dragon Of All Time in both universes. |
Jack Lemmon chapter 18 . 3/2/2018 love this |
Midgardsormr Jr chapter 18 . 2/8/2018 Can I make a suggestion for a story? I would love it if you made a Final Fantasy XIV and Gold Digger crossover revolving around the Dragons of both franchises if you ever get into Fred Perry's Gold Digger Comics. Now this story is a Final Fantasy XIV and Gold Digger crossover with the rating for this story has to be T and the genre of this story has to be Adventure/Friendship with elements of slice of life and tragedy. Aether Dragons and Golden Dragons Part 1: Midgardsormr's powers and abilities. Midgardsormr has to gain all the powers from all his incarnations across the Final Fantasy Franchise and have the powers he had in his prime before going to Hydaeland and making the pact with Mother Crystal and all the abilities the pact provided him and the strength he had in his prime before coming to Eorzea and Hydaelyn and gets even stronger in his second life. Midgardsormr has to obtain not only all the powers of all his incarnations(including the ones Midgardsormr teaches the player in his Final Fantasy VI incarnation as an Esper)but also the ones from the Fred Perry Gold Digger Comics species of Dragons as well as the powers of the Dragon's of the Type Moon Universe and the powers of Bahamut's incarnations from all across the Final Fantasy Franchise and non Final Fantasy appearance's and finally masters all the skills of the Final Fantasy XIV Job system. However Midgardsormr still has the weaknesses of the Dragon's of Final Fantasy XIV. Aether Dragons and Golden Dragons Part 1: The Beginning of the Story. This story should take place after Final Fantasy XIV Storm Blood and Heavens Ward. Midgardsormr is offered a chance to be reborn in the ancient past of another World and Midgardsormr is reborn and in his egg in his reborn out side of the city the of Civ-Alpha and is taken in the by Exthilion himself after wondering how a Dragon egg that is not one of the creation's of the Saurian's or a modified clone of Exthilion like the First Generation of Dragons. After the Dragons take control over Civ-Alpha Midgardsormr grows up alongside Tm'at and Dreadwing and grow to be close friends before Dreadwing goes evil and learns how to use his new powers and relearn his old ones. Midgardsormr has to be more powerful than a Platinum Dragon and eventually Exthillion himself. Aether Dragons and Golden Dragons Part 2: Midgardsormr's Primary Adventures. After The Great Cataclysm occurs and when the dragon Arkanaton created the "Sleep of Stone" to put the entire draconic race into hibernation until the crisis had passed. Many did not survive and Arkanaton himself has never awoken. But after the Cataclysm Midgardsormr using his powers resurrects all of the Dragons who did not survive and finds and awakens Arkanaton himself and he along with his old friend T'mat speak to the spirit of the Earths and learns that they have to migrate to another world as this is not their world anymore as the spirit of the Earth wants them gone and sees them as unnatural monsters and threatens to cause another natural disaster to wipe out the draconic race if they do not leave. Midgardsormr, T'mat, and Exthilion make the rest of the Dragon race to eventually migrate to Jade where Midgardsormr makes a covenant with the spirit of the Jade Realm to allow the draconic race to stay which the spirit of the Jade Realm allows and lets Midgardsormr have his freedom and restores his memories of his previous life and the knowledge and memories of his past life and gives him the powers of the Dragon's of the Type Moon Universe to act as one of the Jade Realm's protectors and the powers of Bahamut's incarnations from all across the Final Fantasy Franchise and masters all the skills of the Final Fantasy XIV Job system the powers with the pact he made with Hydaelyn and the strength he had in his prime before coming to Eorzea and Hydaelyn. Aether Dragons and Golden Dragons Part 3: Midgardsormr's Secondary Adventures. Midgardsormr has to become a Primogenitor of an entire race of Dragons by offer many Wurms and Drakes the opportunity to become his species of Dragons of both his lives, The Dragon race of Final Fantasy XIV and The Gold Aether Dragons and also creating his own empire of Dragons by building two Dragon Horde's as well as make his empire merge science and technology with magic and other mystical practices. He must also be the one to become the father of magic and has spread his knowledge to mortals and dragons after learning and discovering almost all that their is to know about magic. Aether Dragons and Golden Dragons Part 4: Midgardsormr's personality. Midgardsormr in his new life must be mischievous, care free, but also curious, compassionate, and rather mature for his age, but as he grows older he obtains the values of a mature man and becomes a more heroic character similar to Optimus Prime from the Transformers series(specifically his incarnation in Transformer Prime). However when Midgardsormr get's the memories of his past life he obtains his patient and enigmatic traits while also gaining his trademark stoicism from the games and he speaks in a slow, deliberate monotone and exhibits archaic speech patterns that he uses in his position as Emperor of The Gold Aether Dragons and the Aether Dragon Horde. Aether Dragons and Golden Dragons Part 5: Parings. Midgardsormr has to eventually fall in love and mate with a female Dragon(either an OC or one of the Female Dragons from the comics like Jane or Sue)and eventually have a son named Arthus who is his heir and eventually falls in love with D'bra, T'mat's Daughter. Aether Dragons and Golden Dragons Part 6: Midgardsormr's impact on the Gold Digger's world. If you want to make a sequel series or take this story into Gold Digger's Cannon storylines Midgardsormr's impact of the Gold Digger world must be massive and when you go into cannon such as events that take place in the Jade Realm or circle around magic, the Dragon Race, and Dreadwing, Midgardsormr's legacy and impact must be felt and he must play an active part in those arcs as he has become the expert and main Authority but only as a last resort as he has become a Godlike Dragon with near limitless power. |
Perseus12 chapter 16 . 8/29/2017 Genma Saotome, you are DEAD MEAT! |
Thunder Dragon chapter 18 . 7/25/2017 I have an idea for a Koihime Muso and Legend of Zelda if you want to do it seeing as you are a fan of Visual Novels, Video Games and Anime. You up for it? First off the Protagonist has to be Link from both Ocarina of Time and Majora's Mask. But in this adventure Link has to have all the skills, weapons, best gear, magic's and spells, and all the other powers that he has from all the Legend of Zelda games(Nintendo Games, that means you are excluding the CDI Zelda Games as they are not Cannon and just plain bad)so he can be an ace to hold his own against some of the real mad men and some of the truly strongest and most evil foes in both of the series. Link would fit if the Visual Novel's Prophecy of the Messenger of Heaven perfectly as Link is the chosen hero of The Gods of Hyrule. Now if I were you I would go with Link's character portrayal in the official Ocarina of Time and the Majora's Mask Manga. It would be awesome to see Link mature in a War and in his role as a King. Now for the Adaptions of Koihime Muso, If you go with the Visual Novel or it's sequels I expect Link to use his strategic know how from his adventures to his advantage on the battlefield and kicking ass against some of the big dogs in The Three Kingdoms. For the Novel's and it's sequels routes, you can do whatever you want so long as it fits Link's character. For the Anime go take a look at the Armored War God's Saga a Kamen Rider and Koihime Muso crossover for some inspiration. Now for Link's enemies he has to face the White Cloaks and the enemies that Link has faced that threatened the existence of Hyrule(excluding Ganondorf as he is sealed away in the Child and Adult Ocarina of Time timelines) as he goes down the story lines of the Visual Novel and it's sequels or the anime and its various seasons while incorporating elements of the Novels. For Link's Romance options, You can do anything so long as Link is not into loli's, little girls, or Yaoi romance. That is not Link's style nor are those his preference. |
NoobdockSaint chapter 11 . 7/18/2017 I tried to keep reading but honestly it's hard. It's very well written, and parts are interesting but that's the problem. Only parts are interesting, not all of them. I understand the fact that this story isn't JUST about Ranma, but after reading at least 100,000K words it feels like it's not really about him at all, just how he affects the world. It's one thing to take a slow approach, which in all honesty I prefer, but it's another to not go anywhere. Maybe it picks up soon but seeing as how the story is likely abandoned its just not worth it to find out. Which is a shame really as the story does have a lot of potential. Either way, thanks for your hard work |
chris8124u chapter 18 . 5/29/2017 like your story hope you continue |
chris8124u chapter 15 . 4/16/2017 on the difference with photographic reflexes and Ranma , Ryan may know many moves but the way it sounds he hasn't trained mind and body to the level that Ranma has and Ranma also is able to take a technique and deconstruct it and improve it in other words he understands it inside and out and just doesn't memorize it |
Thunder Dragon chapter 12 . 2/11/2017 I found another problem. The Letter that Ranma left originally was different in this chapter than it was in chapter 8. |