AWWW SO KAWIII 3

You are an amazing writer :) please im beging you to update :(

awww :( plz update soon! this naruhina is by far the best one if read. 3

OK! Another nice chapter.

Thanks for sharing.

Finally, a chapter I enjoyed reading. Even though Sai was a bit weird, maybe even OOC?

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Damn! That was so wrong! I hated the idea and the chapter.

Sorry, no cookie for you.

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This was so very weird. Sorry, but I just couldn't like it.

Nice! Thanks for sharing.

Hinata flirting is not so bad. But her not being sweet and innocent is! I'm actually a bit annoyed that you think that a 'sweet' Hinata would just follow Naruto. I don't think she would.

Anyway! thanks for sharing.

Thanks for writing. It was a sweet chapter.

I liked the chapter, but the ending was a little weird. That may be just me though.

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This was a decent chapter. Weird jokes, but the chapter was decent nonetheless. I didn't get why Naruto was feeling blue earlier though. That part was weird.

Thanks for sharing.

Every chapter you write feels like a cake you baked and the sugar is just a little less than the amount you actually needed to put in. I feel like I'm eating that cake whenever I read your chapters. There's something beautiful hidden in there, that's just not reaching its full potential.

Please try keeping your language simple. Using big words is not necessarily a good thing. Simple language is often the most beautiful and powerful. This chapter would've been so sweet, but it wasn't because of language issues.

Thanks for sharing.

Ouch! You had so many little spelling/grammar/usage errors in this one. It was a sweet chapter that didn't reach its full potential because of the said errors. Get a beta!

Thanks for sharing.