This is so cool. I have never wanted to play the demon path before because of the ending of the game xD but now i think im gonna try it hahhaaha. I really love this. I know soul nomad is old now but i still wish for more fanfic of gig and revya ;;; because i suddenly miss this game so much. Can i request for more gigrevya fanfic pretty pls ;A;

Hahahahaha if a kid a kid was hotpod then we'll confuse the heck out it that's for sure.

You made revya sound just like gig

My god, that was awesome _

definitely added to my favorites.

Nice story i can't stop laughing

you sure know how to combine Romance and Comedy hehehehehe

10 stars.

-I hope so… , how are we going to name it?

They stared at each other.

-WERE NOT NAMING IT HOTPOD!

-WERE NOT NAMING IT HOTPOD!

Lol 0_o

the best fanfiction of Soul Nomad \o/

LOVED IT

The plot is exellent but... Script writting isn't aproprate for a story. Script being when you write like this

-Hello

It also makes in increadably hard to tell whos talking and the emoution doesn't get though as well as it could. Something like

"Hello!" the boy called out cheerfully

Fits better

Also description of characters, places and behavior. It makes your story longer and more intresting that simply a large amount of dialouge

Sorry but you show so much promise when it comes to ideas and characters are in character it's just some basic writting tecneks will make the story more enjoyable

LOL! I love it! ...

its really really really good. amusing actually. although the bad ending was really irritating. (no offense) i mean, i think she was pretty insane that she decided to kill him. that's why its called the bad ending, right? good thing you made two endings. overall, and finally done. you did a very good job. im looking forward to your other works.

dude! i liked some of your qoutes! (Are u a dude?) some were sweet and others just surprised me!

oh yeah, i forgot to add. you did a really good job on the personalities. too bad i hadn't played the demon path yet but i'm expecting it to be did real well. they may be some typo errors but as far as i have read, its good.

well, it is a bit confusing coz there are some parts when you don't know who is really talking. clearing that part will really be appreciated. good story though. haephness and vigilance put on a good show. hehe... gig.

Awesome..! But wait! They had a CHILD?

Woah~~

What an amazing imagination you've got there!

wow

two ending .