Reviews for Mou Ichido Kono Te Ni Chansu Wo
Guest chapter 17 . 12/10/2017
Still waiting two years later
Tenshiwings101 chapter 17 . 7/19/2017
Please update the story it's a amazing story and Is realy want toen Know what will happen next!
LezBlowShitUp chapter 17 . 5/1/2017
Gosh, this chapter makes my heart ache. If you were thinking about killing Kira off, DON'T! Anyway, on with the actual constructive information. I'm intrigued by your choice to portray Patrick Zala as the good guy here. Not many have ventured to do that, and I think it's a notable decision. By choosing to describes him positively, you have developed his relationship with Athrun as well. It's this whole domino effect thing. Your scene with Kira wrapped in Athrun's arms fast asleep is so sweet I felt like blushing while reading it. All of those little vignettes of loveliness are just wonderful. The way you end the chapter is sweet as well, but I like how you approach their affection through the domestic setting. Patrick, Kira, and Athrun all gathering to watch a movie feels so normal and familiar, but that's what makes it great. You take the time to describe them rummaging through cupboards and just regular events. It really ground their relationship in something real. Well done!
crazypianoman2194 chapter 17 . 7/13/2016
Oh please please please continue this story! I have been following it for the past five years and I absolutely love it!
rebirth-flame chapter 17 . 12/6/2015
oh my god please don't let kira die TT
Guest chapter 17 . 9/20/2015
It's really cool that you're asking for coders to help plot out how to make Kira's idea work. Trying to include realism takes a lot of background work sometimes and it's really appreciated! I know jackshit about coding and programming, so I can't help, but I wanted to tell you I appreciate the effort!

*cuddles Athrun and Kira*
Joker Oak chapter 17 . 9/11/2015
Superb story, I look forward to seeing your next update. Unfortunately I am not much of a cryptographer so I can't offer you anything there.
Guest chapter 17 . 7/27/2015
update please
byakuya love chapter 10 . 6/29/2015
Murrue! Stop moping around and save them! Kick La Flaga out already! Oh myy...

I feel bad for Tolle and friends.. please please hang on until the end! Kira with his alliance will save you! QAQ

Keep writing!
byakuya love chapter 9 . 6/29/2015
I can't get tired of AthrunKira's moments! Especially when they were being lovey dovey and adorable with each other! /burying my flushed face on pillows/ Lacus is nice, supports their relationship like everyone else do! :D

Trust me, I love the idea Kira was singing his heart out only for Athrun, his beloved soulmate! This chapter makes me cry... it's so deep, I can feel Kira's undying love and loyal for Athrun! You did a very very good job, author-san!

Oh, and I can't blame Dearka! I would be guessing it was a wedding invitation too! *chuckles*

KEEP WRITING! XDD
byakuya love chapter 8 . 6/29/2015
THIS CHAPTER IS AWESOME! Wow, oh you got me dizzy! I don't know where to start... I want to comment every moments! XD

So to keep it short, I really love the way Patrick was being a protective and caring father! What I love the most is when Athrun embraced Kira as he sat behind the brunet boy and let his fiance play the piece! It was so intimatee, and when Kira goes slack in his arms, Athrun's reaction was endearing! Really!

I love love love the playlists and this fanfic! Keep writing!:D
byakuya love chapter 7 . 6/28/2015
I HATE KIRA'S FOSTER PARENTS! How could they do that?! Kira is pure and innocent! How dare you people break him like that!?

Athrun would never ever leave you, Kira! He loves you he's willing to go through anything for you! Please, please, be better and go living a happy ending! You two deserves it!

I pity Yzak though.. I hope Dearka can get him to talk, and Nicol, I wants you to play the piano at Athrun and Kira's wedding! Pretty pleaseee? /plakk!

I love Athrun's nickname for Kira! 'Koishii' is befitting Kira perfectly when Athrun is the one calling him!

It's a satisfying chapter! Keep writing! :D
byakuya love chapter 6 . 6/28/2015
Ughhh...

STOPP ITT! STOP YOUR CUTENEESSS QAQ STOP THE I'M-CUTE-ADORABLE-AND-WOW-I'M-CLUELESS AURA, YOU TWO! I can't imagine Kira being a rock star, haha, whatever I'm in a good mood because the happy flashback is so amusing! :D

Patrick is awesome, too. He loves and dotting on Kira even though.. mm... what, I don't know the words /duakk!

I love AthrunKira and their moments, no matter how painful they are, because their bond is so strong I have faith they would come back like their childhood selfs! Athrun's love is obvious, and so is Kira's :'))

Keep writing!
byakuya love chapter 5 . 6/28/2015
... I... don't know what to say...

Meanwhile it's refreshing to read about what happen in the Archangel, La Flaga is too cruel I can't take it! And Murrue is still alive? I hope she would coming back quickly to retake her rightful position!

... I hate Flay though. No offense!

Keep writing! :D
byakuya love chapter 4 . 6/28/2015
SOOOOO SWEEEEEETTT! /die/

Oh my god! Oh my gooodd! So so sweet and fluff I can't push it out from my mind! /squeals/ I want to see chibi Kira and Athrun dances together! They're adorable and I want to steal them for myself! /kicked by Caridad and Lenore/

I can't take my eyes off this chapter! Athrun's team is considerate too about Kira's feelings! I'm soo haappyy! /promptly dismissed the ending/

This is great! Keep writing! :D
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