The story is really good but I'm scared for fuji I mean what if those bad guys really did remember him and broke in his house? What if they kill fuji while he's defenseless because of the girl? What will happen to him? Uwaah I don't want anything bad happen to fuji :((( Now I'm starting to sound like oishi, the seigaku's mother hen tsk tsk.

Anyway congrats for a story well done! Yeyyyy! Cheers for the author! :)))

Awesome please update soon pretty please O.O

I love your story and hope you plain to write more

Thought it would have a sappier ending, and real glad it didn't.

Marshmallows... Priceless, truly amusingly priceless xD

Dude... This is adorable and I really would like you to continue this story...
Rei

Nice! Though the story seems kinda familiar, I think it's in one of the books I once read... Oh well, it doesn't matter. Looking forward to reading your other fics!

This one-shot is fantastic, buuuuuut it would be even better if it was a two-shot. ;p

Sora's cool in a way~trying to be independent and all,

She actually sounds like Fuji in Broken Smile.

very refreshing...a whole lot different from the usual OCs i'ved read...loved it._

your stories are good. perhaps its just the habit to not finish some?

i just want to know if you gave up on this story, cuz i really like it. thank god the oc is not some romantic fangirl. her toughness might balance out with fuji's softness. it works. plus, they CAN have a double marriage. its not impossible :)

hopefully, our dear fuji is able to fight of anything other than marshmallows (what about roasted ones?)

faithfully waiting for your writing muse to came back!

Let me start by saying I didn't read the first story, so my review may be hampered by that. Technically, your story is good. As far as characterizations go, I don't know. I don't know any "troubled" people like your OC personally, so I don't know if you've captured that kind of personality accurately or not. Also I don't know if Fuji would allow himself to develop romantic feelings for someone he is trying to help like that.

This is a one-shot, I assume?

i luv ur fanfics. your oc has a interestin personality making me want to read more!

Wow.

Sora's one of the most unique OC's I've ever seen in this fandom. I really love how you portrayed her and Fuji. This looks like it'll be very interesting :D

Update soon~

i really enjoyed reading this story, i can't wait to read some of your other ones!

Keep up the good work