this was very painful. But i loved every word of it

I really like how you wrote Naruto as a father. Great story. :)

A very emotional story :,)
Keep up the good work

i really like this story í í

Heartfelt and depressing.

I love this so much omigod :3

wow, this was sooo awesome!
i really think you captured naruto's emotions perfectly. great job:)

Your work is amazing. Really. This story has left me speechless. Everything about it is perfect, and I have honestly not come across another author who captures emotions in words as good as this. Awesome job. I would read anything you write without hesitation, good luck with your future works and I'll very much look forward to them. Thank you!

I loved it! Great job but it kinda made me sad.

i loved it,nice story!

Realistic and touching.

SO BEAUTIFUL, I AM BAWLING
(I'm also sorry to be spamming your stories with crazed reviews)
But goddammit you are just too bloody brilliant not to fawn over. The pace was perfect and you wove in the flashbacks seamlessly. Great job!

You are a master dude, a true master at weaving emotions into words. I am also reading your other story 'Precious people', well more like trying to catch up and I believe that is one of the best Naruto fanfics out there. You do a great job so keep it up and never give up!
Thanks,
Tanneal

I don't think I reviewed before. This story was so beautiful. Even though he is the Hokage, he's not perfect, and he can't control his emotions. This was beautiful but very sad all the same:(

I wish this was longer, a story where a girl fights to get acknowledgement from her father.

Wonderful one-shot. I especially loved the ending with two instead of too. I look forward to the rest of your stories and some of their updates.

~iCaelum