Hi amazing story have you abandoned it i shore hope not i hope to see a update soon

I'm sorry I can't quite buy it. Harry would have knocked the aurors out and obviated them just as he did in book 7 in the mugge diner. It leaves a cleaner trail than a bunch of dead bodies and there is no way that he would murderer aurors in front of Teddy and then try and claim he's better than the Malfoys. I'm not sure why you're invested in Harry turning against himself, nor am I clear on why the Malfoys are so OCC (Draco is not really the calm collected, reasonable type, particularly when he feels slighted). There are so many elements that I like about this story but would have preferred to see a version where Harry showed Teddy why it was that he always sacrificed every part of himself to the right thing instead a realization that it's alright to be as selfish as the Malfoys have always been

Very interesting concept. The Malfoys are the most Slytherin family of all, completely and utterly self-motivated from the word go. Everything they do is to their own benefit, and their own benefit only. They make terrible allies because they have no loyalty except to one another (and no I don't think that would include Teddy at all). I'm interested to see what happens and hope Harry doesn't fall for Lucius' self interested politics. The Harry at the very end of canon was becoming wise to that kind of maneuvering but Azkaban could have either increase or destroyed this kind of skill

I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too. Keep up the great work because you are great writer.

Thank you,

Terri

have you aboned this or a you planning a new chapther

I like your story, but you forgot all about Andromeda. She died to protect and help her grandson Harry, was killed by Aurors who were going to kill Teddy. But neither speaks her grandson when he mentions his parents, his tomb is not mentioned as near her daughter. And when Teddy responds to Bill, mention would have been perfect as well.

I'm waiting for the sequel.

love it a lot!

Okay, I admit that it has become much more readable by this chapter. Not the writing, because that is honestly excellent, but Harry's utter incompetence. However, is he not a puppet? He is literally being put up in a Dark Lord's position, rather than claiming it and gathering followers himself.

Why is Harry so pathetically weak? It's bad enough that he's constantly angry, he also has failed to connect at least seven punches, and not drawn his wand a single time except to attack his godson when he woke up from a nightmare. This makes the story extremely frustrating to read, even if its premise is very interesting. He calls himself a Dark Lord, threatens people but is all bluster. I can understand that Azkaban may have unhinged him... but if so, he is clearly an unfit guardian and the plot is hopeless. A revenge plot suits a crazy person, not a raising-kid plot. Not that he would get far with that, as apparently he has forgotten how to use magic.

I can picture Minnie in her animagus form with a collar that has a bell and tag that says "kitty" on it. Time for people to see that Dark doesn't equate to Evil. Write on!

great story, im suprised you dont have more reviews

The plot of the story is just awsome,plz plz post another chapter soon!

interesting

Duuuuuuddddee update!

Found this story and loved it! It's been like what a year?

Prioritise please!

hurry up with chapter 11 please