i love this. please update

You took Ryou's penis away! For that alone, I dislike your story.

I'm sorry, but I already hate the OC woman you created. I don't know who she is or whether it was your intention for me to hate her but every single little thing she has done in this fanfiction so far has pissed me off completely.

;w; great story

haha Greek god Jupiter Roman god Zeus funny

THIS IS AN AMAZING STORY! SO PPPPLLLLZZZZ UPDATE

*APLUASE!* ! I lurved this chapter! It wuz great! PERFECTION ONCE AGAIN! Heehee! Yay yay yay! One test should be that their Lights get kidnapped and they gotz to save 'em from something! And yeah, Marik cares enoug about Malik to save him! Update soon!

'Destiny and Fate from what Izizu Ishtar says' that's funny, two of my characters names are Destiny and Fate. They're twins, lol. great chappie!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAW! I IT! IT'S SO FNICKING ADORABLE! My fave part was 'Bakura slammed the door open yelling for Nicky to stay the Hell away from his kids'

Heehee! perfection!

Whats gonna happen! Whats gonna happen! Whats gonna happen! Ahh the suspense!

Love the story! Maybe for a test each of the darks has to be locked in a room with someone they can't stand and see if they can make it through 24 hours without killing eachother like Kaiba vs Joey or something Or they could have their loved ones taken away and they have to go through an epic battle to get them back (like in harry potter #4 yeah hp reference sorry :) Ok last idea... for now unless you want more of course ;) In greek mythology one hero had to do challanges that tested physical strength and that taught him humility (this big burly hero had to be a maidservent for a while teehee) It would be interesting to see Seto try to learn to be humble :) Hope this helps Good luck with your next chapie! can't wait! :D

THANKS FOR THE UPDATE! AND CONGRATS ON GETTING THE PLOT OUT!

heres an idea for the test! wat if all the light(& mokuba don't know if he's a light?) get really sick w/ something from the shadow relem and they're at the point of almost dieing! and the only way 4 the darks to save them is to put there differents aside and work toghter w/ the coulors to save them!

wow, i love the throne room! the mysticism was very believable. i was beginning to wonder how you were gonna do the Items's past.

as for tests... the only thing i can think of right now would have to be for Ma'at, judging/revealing the truth about their creation. which would put at least Yami and Bakura in the same test. were you thinking of doing each guy seperately or all together? and what about the others, are you gonna include their reincarnated families? something involving Konshu would work for the thieves...

oh, and i love that it's Thief King and General of Thieves, and that their ranks come across in their friendship.(too many people make AEMarik and assassin for some reason.)

i'll pm you if i think of anything else! (not like i haven't done it already, right? ;D)

Oh Cool and oh Spicy! XD Cant wait for the rest!

Yo yo! I heard yo liked to play yo-yo but yo have to walk yo dog so I taped yo dog to yo yo-yo, yo, yo, yo?

Love that joke.

Anyvay, letoos see vhat needzs to be said aboot ze fanfeec!

*clears throat, pulling out a scroll that unravels to the floor*

I enjoy the amount of detail you put in, it makes everything seem more vivid in my mind. (Remeber, kiddies: vivid-ness happiness!) It's clear you had a lot of time on your hands, judging from the size of the chapter, and that a good deal of effort was put into it as well.

Getting this part out of the way, everyone was in character. It's creepy how easily I can hear their voices, but it's a good sign! ...For the most part.

I like how you gave satisfying (that is SO misspelled) closure for the chapter, as oppossed to just leaving it to dry with a freaking cliffhanger and frustrating everyone who's reading it. Thumbs up, good job!

Hell, the whole thing in general has me hooked!

That was my report, enjoy the lemons! They're the same ones used to make the orange juice. Goodnight, ladies and gentlemen, try the penguin!

With love and hopefully adequet (sp?) humor and spelling,

October Talisman