This story has made my night!

Holy crap this is hilarious! Optimus' reaction to them is gold.

Kind of want to see the reactions of everyone else when they first saw it though.

Hahaha, poor Optimus!

cant...stop...laughing...need...to...breathe...great...

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i'm surprised Primal's head didn't explode, damn that was funny

Oh this made my day! Poor OP, waking up to having the universe basically turned upside down in the form of two of his teammates together is a real cheap shot...A HILARIOUS cheap shot that I love to read, but a cheap shot none~the~less LOL.

I think Oppy might be sleeping for a very long time! ;] On another note- Yay! I like this pairing and-Yay! I like Oppy! A definate favourite! X] I'd love you to write some more fics like this soon!

Till all are one

Meteor Prime

ROFL! That was so cute! Poor Optimus! XD Like, everyone forgot he was out of it so he couldn't have known. XD But they were all already used to it! omg that was so fun.

Nice grammar and spelling. I liked the dialogue a lot too! Had very nice flow and interaction and the characters seemed IC for their situation. XD

Great job! :D

I need to stop reading fanfiction in the middle of the night. I can only suppress my giggles so well. XD Very cute.

*falls over laughing* Oh that is good! Yes poor Prime... he would have a CPU crashing issue if Dinobot and Rattrap did do that in front of him... *snickers* Very funny! And lots of fun to read it!

Your BW stories never fail to delight, Fay. This was well written and as hilarious as hotpants, especially in regards to Primal's gobsmacked reactions. Brava!

Poor Optimus.

This was adorably amusing. I enjoy a good Dinotrap and Optimus' confusion just made it even more fun.

Come on Primal, you should have expected this outcome. XD