I love your story. I do wish it would continue. I'd love more. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Mickey Hall

Great story. Well done! Thank you.

Love ALL your stories. Favorite Love Songs... Linda R0nstadt - Heart Like a Wheel & Rod Stewart - You’re In My Heart

Awful

Nice idea but horribly written

A chauvinistic and misogynistic story.

I was really liking your story but something happened and I just realised how sexist and misogynistic it really is. In today's world we need to start overcoming gender stereotypes and discriminations and instead promote equality whenever we can. And it truly disappointing that a writer with such potential as yourself would conform her/ himself to orthodoxical thinking instead of being open to more modern ideas.

loving the writing and the plot, but man... sometimes these characters are *very* unlikeable. i’m getting close to just skipping over Rosalie because she’s just... ugh, ya know?

This was a very fun story. I needed fun! Thanks for sharing your writing talent.

Talk!

These two are always lying to each other.

I thought Alice was dead! Literally, not figuratively. I guess I've been reading dark stuff.
Looking forward to reading more.

Thank you, short break ups are best if they must happen.

Trust issues and insecurity can destroy a person and a solid relationship. Seek help and get strong for yourself and others. Edward should make her work a little for it. JS

Edward fucked up as he has realized by not sharing with Bella. *shakes head & tsk at male stupitity*But for the love of freaking god can Bella once bitch up and confront the situation and not run Bella, run? Good grief!