Love this story- hope there are another story of Alyssa and Snape.

I would love if you did an excerpt of Severus POV for reading the diary and his reaction to finding out she was his daughter and then seeing her dead at the battle. It seems to be lacking on that front we don’t really get to see his reactions much

So GOOD :)

This was adorable! I hope you decide to continue this story. I wanna see the relationship development between Alyssa and Draco and Snape I also wanna see pansys reaction lol

I really love the "let her die and go regretting" pattern lol, thank you for writing this

I love this fic so much! :D

AGHHHH I LOVED IT! Please continue

Please continue

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!
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aaaah but i want to see how snape and alyssa will act around each other! and more dralyssa! pls continue?

place continue it was getting really interesting

Update soon please

Hi! This is going to be a really really really long review, so sorry about that. First of all, I want to state the point that I want you to continue the story. I have quite a lot of things that I want to see in the story.

First, I just basically want maybe at least 1 chapter on Snape and Alyssa together in DADA class. I would like to see how Alyssa is being treated by Snape. I want to see the reaction of both of them in DADA class.

Second, I want to know if Alyssa and Draco are going to let people know about their relationship.

Third, one of my hobbies is figure skating, and I would really like a chapter on Alyssa and the 7th years having a skating competition, where a coach teaches them, and the competition is Gryffindor versus Slytherin, so Ron and Draco will compete. Also, I would really like it if Snape and Mcgonnagal and some other teachers were reaquiored to go to practices and watch the students skate. Please make Alyssa a really good skater! And also, please let Alyssa fall down really badly on her arm, and then try hide it by covering it with the sleeve of her jacket. But then obviously, nothing can be hidden from Snape, so Snape brings her to his office and heals her broken arm. I would love it if Alyssa skated exactly the same as the girl in the watch?vke0iusvydl8 She's really famous so you probably know this girl: Yulia Lipnitskaya. She's one of my favourite skaters, although her jumping isnt that good, but thats off topic, so yeah, like I was saying I would love it id she skated exactly like this and won the competition for Gryffindor.

If you agree, I was thinking if you could actually help you write the skating chapter? and the part where Snape heals her broken arm? If you want to write it yourself, its fine, I understand, its just that I have no idea how to post stories on fanfiction.

And please continue this to the school year, and when the semester finishes, I love ths story so much!

By the way, do you have any other stories?

If you have time to email me, please do, I would really appreciate it, my eamil is

I hope Alyssa and Severus can come to a peaceful agreement about their lives. They both deserve it.

This is amazing! But I kinda wish Snape had been more sympathetic when she was going to her death because I think he would have cared somewhat and it makes him seem horrible that he would look at someone sacrificing themselves and not mind. Maybe you could have an add on chapter which is his POV of that scene showing that he does care a bit? But you probably finished this ages ago anyway! Great work though and great writing