Man...talk about...falling out of love...I wonder if this even IS a MInaKari fanfic...I mean sure the beginning was nice and all...but then it went down hill...but oh well...Good Story anyway!

haha, love ur style man, this reflects a anti-takeba agenda but thats why i love it so, nice layout, very intriguing :D

I'm shocked! You named your main character Minato? Wow, I thought that I was the only one to do that. lol well good job!

These stories are somewhat crackish and hard to take seriously. But I think you've done a masterful job at with the presentation and tonality.

A-Ah well... u-uh...

Yukari's my most favourite character in Persona 3 and uh... her having uh... you know what with the protagonist is uh... nevermind. Maybe it's cuz I'm too young. Anyway, story-wise is not bad, really sweet. Grammar wise really good! Overall: 98%

To Glass Sugar: Why do people like you hate Yukari so much? Tell me! .

this was a really sweet story and i loved reading it. although i hate yukari with all the blood in my veins. honestly she was the most annoying character period in that game. im sorry that im ranting like this but fuuka or aigis would be better for minato, make yukari jump into a volcano or something. anyway keep writing :)