ummm... okay?

Lol that was so cute 3!
XDDD

Okay, I like this story, and it's a good story as your first, but I believe it was rushed a little, and I got confused, first, Mac pretty much says he does not have feelings for Goo, then all of a sudden, he says that he loves her, and start a new paragraph every time someone talks, It makes it hard to read if you don't. But other than that, I liked it. Good story.

Awesome make another chapter

Not bad, i really do like this pair and wish they could get together in the show hehee X3

Very cute and funny, but...

1. Goo didn't act like Goo

AND GOO ARE EIGHT! They wouldn't fall in love!

3. The format confused me, I had to guess who was speaking.

But in the end, it was a good story, ESPECIALLY for a first-timer!

lol i like this story the ending is hilarious! that was good for a first timer it was awesome not many are good i dont think mine was good but yeah this was good keep writing! :D

ha..cute..

Let's see... the descriptions were criminally short... the characters were set in improbable characterizations and events... Goo in particular suffered greatly from this... confusing phrasing meant I had to guess who was speaking half the time... This whole story is in less than 10 paragraphs! The premise is good, and I'd actually back it if it wee better executed.

LMAO! Bloo's going to tease him unmercifully...

hahaha, i love the ending! this is definitaly one of my favorite stories! I wish the series didnt end! 3

Damn this story is really good i like it i wish it had more reviews so you could know how good your story is

That was a nice short story. I loved the part where Frankie told Mr. Herriman to pull the carrot out of his ass.

That was very cute and a little funny too. Good work!