| Reviews for Business As Usual |
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  Ej chapter 15 . 11/19/2017 Hope this gets continued. |
 koolgirlkat chapter 1 . 11/26/2012 Cool |
| JigglyJelloWithCoconut chapter 17 . 2/12/2012 love these little one shots 3 Im gonna randomly connect the dots here and ask if that part about the "come closer, closer" kiss was from The Mummy? |
| Judah chapter 1 . 6/21/2011 Compared against the writing level in your "Magician" story, this is amazingly bad. You've gotten much better as a writer in the past year. I won't be checking out other previous works. Passive word redundancies like "some very different" and "not even bothering to use" are story flow disruptors. Good luck continuing to improve your writing. |
| Yami-no-Tamashii chapter 21 . 4/7/2011 Please continue this collection! It's very intriguing, especially the Witchcraft stories - I LOVE those, and you're writing has improved very noticeably as the chapters go on. So, whenever you have time, don't forget to try and work on this, 'kay? ~Darkie |
| LittleRuu chapter 21 . 9/6/2010 Hard Candy as in the movie or what? I remember my lecturer asked us to watch that movie for assignment a long time ago and I LOVE IT. Anyway, this chapter is kinda... weird... Just like a prologue I think..? Maybe I shall wait for the next part to make a better comment. lol. xD |
| Goku's Daughter chapter 14 . 9/3/2010 Very creative! I like! GD xx |
| Goku's Daughter chapter 13 . 9/3/2010 Good ending! It gave me another idea too lmao~ (I wonder if I can even remember these ideas haha) Next chapter GD xx |
| Goku's Daughter chapter 12 . 9/3/2010 lol - thats all i can say so far - next chapter |
| Goku's Daughter chapter 11 . 9/3/2010 Man if Ichigo and Rukia ever combine powers that would be great! Enjoyed it! Next chapter! GD xx |
| Goku's Daughter chapter 8 . 9/3/2010 hahah ichigo is a panties-thief! The only suggestion I can make is some of the lemons now are starting to sound... similar but that happens. I still enjoyed it! GD xx |
| Goku's Daughter chapter 7 . 9/3/2010 ) This gave me an idea... Anyways good job again! Next chapter GD xx |
| Goku's Daughter chapter 6 . 9/2/2010 Aw this was super cute too! I shall read more tomorrow! GD xx |
| Goku's Daughter chapter 5 . 9/2/2010 lmao... "Don't expect much sleep tonight." I enjoyed the lemon! good job! GDxx |
| Goku's Daughter chapter 4 . 9/2/2010 /"Now it's the final round! For bragging rights and line cuts, let's have a nice, dirty fight! Go!"/ lol Nice fight scenes! GD xx |
