This is great! Please continue!

Please continue this.

Great story ! Please go on !

My name's Talia! :D I wish you would finish this! It was off to a good start! I wanna read moreee. :(

its a great storty i love it and i think you should write more your a great writer its ne of the best house story

I really like how you you showed Houses kinder side. Please add more soon!

please update soon!

I love this story! It's so interesting!

This story is absolutely terrible. Please, for the good of humanity, quit writing.

It already happened in the series, her name was "Amber". And nothing happ- nothing romantic happene- nothing romantic with House happened. If this isn't a romantic story(ah! the genre doesn't say romance, okay. okay.) She can't stay... Amber wasn't kept around. One of the, well he wasn't a doctor, people trying to get a fellowship from House didn't get to stay. The only one with a CHANCE of gaining sympathy from him is Wilson... so the ACTUALLY ORIGINAL plotline could be "What happens when House meets someone exactly like Wilson?" I'm not saying that it makes the plotline any more interesting, it just makes it original.

Inst resting story, hope you update soon!

What happens when House meets a girl that is similar to him? One word: Amber

Not nearly one of the best I've seen. The genre don't say it's going to be a Romance, and I sincerely hope it stays that way. A sixteen-year-old girl with a 40-year-old or so? Ew.

Not to mention she seems like a mary-sue: looks just like House, just the same, and has all the right connections. I couldn't spot many grammatical errors. There were a FEW at the end of people talking but that's all.

It has potential. Keep truckin'.

~Kyuuketsuki_Nekko

UPDATE! Dammit! Really good. A little short, but you brought the caring side of House that is rarely shown in the series. UPDATE!

I like this very much. Would you ever consider carrying it on?

Great stuff.